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Forgetting With Jack

we sat and listened as his heart broke a crack was heard as each word spoke he had lost sight of truth when he was betrayed tricked by her slight of hand seduced with a magical cat a bar stool found his searching feet, and his hand found Jack purpose drained as each glass emptied reason and sanity fell away all she had left were empty boxes in dusty corners a stray piece of lego had stood stationary on its end waiting for small hands that had once been the master of its kingdom Jack lays on his side and with a wimping snore, breaking the even stillness of silence I lay here looking for tomorrow hoping soberity and hope emerges, from the emptying bottle of despair he now dwells in to forget For C ..

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Date: 6/11/2011 7:27:00 PM
this is such a sad one. Say, I was going over my list of fave poets today and noticed your name is one i have not seen in a long time. I hope you come back one day! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 10/11/2010 5:38:00 AM
you know how to write your peace here so well thank you massive thought here thank you [duncan]
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Date: 10/3/2010 3:44:00 AM
sad, some of the people with the sweetest hearts go this way, their too fragile mentally to deal with the hand life dealt them. Such a hard place to be. My contest will be open a while it's too hard for most people. Do not use a translater for the whole thing, just type more or less phonetically of how they would sound & use dialect dictionaries! Can't wait to read it! Light & Love
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Date: 9/28/2010 10:44:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your outstanding poetry today Jayne. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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