Forever Flowers

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The cream picket fence is crowded by vivid blooms, peeking out at sun. Lovely colors rise above a fence that goes forever. Fragrant secrets shared, delighting the passersby, 'til a rouge sun sinks. Ageless days keep returning, touched by magic mystery.

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Silpika Kalita

Date: 8/9/2022 11:41:00 AM

What an aesthetically beautiful tanka, it has its own fragrance.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/9/2022 4:02:00 PM

Thank you for saying so, dear Silpika. Blessings.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/8/2022 4:48:00 PM

Every day has its glory! Hugs ~ Kim

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/8/2022 8:41:00 PM

That's it exactly, Kim! Hugs :D

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/8/2022 1:08:00 AM

A special poem. As I go to church early morning I admire the purple flowers of the climber Morning Glory.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/8/2022 10:35:00 AM

Thank you very much. I love morning glories, so appropriately named. :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/7/2022 10:33:00 PM

A beautiful vision to help the mind escape the sizzling sun Evelyn. Blessings xxoo

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/8/2022 10:37:00 AM

Thank you for the lovely compliment. Have a blessed day, xxoo

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/7/2022 8:00:00 PM

All your flower poems are special, I think. This one is just extra-special for me. That 'cream picket fence' and 'the rouge sun' have me sighing. FAVE! Thanks, Evelyn!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/7/2022 8:09:00 PM

You are so very welcome, my friend. Thank you for the pleasure of knowing you enjoyed this, and for the honor of a fave. :)