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We walked slowly along the busy road My tiny hand slipped into yours I clung tightly on to you Whilst my sister skipped off with her friends My brown leather satchel hung from my shoulder We arrived at the entrance to the school Not a word passed between us Suddenly the silence was broken … DING A LING A LING A LING My class teacher Mrs Kempster stood in the doorway She was ringing a hand bell Even after all these years I can still picture her so vividly She was a large hard faced woman - The exact opposite to my petite mum We were ushered into the classroom like little lambs Mrs Kempster’s 10-year-old son Nigel joined us He had earache and was not going to school that day For some reason his mum left the classroom She asked Nigel to keep an eye on us Nigel started running round the room… About a dozen of us followed, we thought this was fun! Suddenly, Mrs Kempster burst into the classroom She was shouting at us, absolutely furious! Nigel sat down quickly - he had a huge smirk on his face Only three of us were hauled up in front of her Mrs Kempster went to her desk drawer She pulled out a large black gym shoe Then hit us three times on the back of our legs Tears welled up in my eyes I couldn’t wait to hear the bell ring DING A LING A LING A LING Only then I could go back to the safety of my mother’s arms This has been very cathartic to write - is a true account of my first day at infant school. My mother complained to the headmaster … but nothing was ever done Contest – For whom the Bell Tolls – Sponsor Debbie Guzzie 07~27~15

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/9/2015 12:47:00 PM
Belated congrats Jan, and yes, I can relate to being punished in school. In those days, it didn't take much to get into trouble, especially when my school was religious. Hugs//James xx
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James Fraser
Date: 10/9/2015 12:59:00 PM
Hopefully I'll catch up on your poems Jan. Olive has a christening tomorrow, so it's early zzzz, which allows me comment although I'll miss our daily chat xx
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Date: 10/9/2015 12:55:00 PM
It was as a result of this poem that my poetry journey was broadcast on Manx radio - on the very day Darren came back into my life with his first e mail in 10 months :-) hugs Jan x
Date: 8/8/2015 2:22:00 PM
I really liked your unique and interesting take on the bells theme... I'm glad you were able to release that pain, Jan. Writing about it always seems to help!... Congrats on a well deserved win!
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Date: 8/8/2015 2:27:00 PM
There is poetic justice Kelly - I sent this to the local readio station and was interviewed last week about my poetry journey! I have done a blog - I hope you are able to access the web page:) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/6/2015 9:58:00 PM
If I was your mother she would have got a piece of my mind LOUDLY! Thank you for entering the contest. Light & Love
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/7/2015 2:07:00 AM
Thanks Debbie - I guess there is poetic justice here - it was only by sending this poem in to the local radio station that resulted in me being interviewed about my poetry journey:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/4/2015 9:39:00 PM
The cathartic aspect of poetic release in full bloom. This one really pissed me off Jan, I'd like to put one of my size 10's up both their arses. Congrats on the win both in the contest and in finding some release within the poetic context.
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Date: 8/5/2015 2:39:00 AM
Poetic justice here John - I sent this poem to the local radio station - they were doing an item on smacking ... I have since been up to the radio station to talk about my poetry journey - am hoping it will be broadcast today - will do a blog and a link if it sounds ok :-) Jan xx
Date: 8/4/2015 8:38:00 AM
A difficult experience for you, especially at that age. Beautiful poem.
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Date: 8/4/2015 9:48:00 AM
I have NEVER forgotten it James - I was only 5 :-( It has been cathartic to write the poem:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/4/2015 5:38:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Jan...hugs
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Date: 8/4/2015 5:41:00 AM
Thanks Joseph I do appreciate your continued support:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/4/2015 1:33:00 AM
Back to congratulate you, Jan! hugs
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Date: 8/4/2015 3:04:00 AM
Thanks so much Kim:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/4/2015 1:00:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome win Jan! Brilliant take!
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Date: 8/4/2015 3:03:00 AM
Thanks Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/4/2015 12:28:00 AM
Jan, Congratulations, on your win in Debbie's contest. Love SKAT
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Date: 8/4/2015 3:03:00 AM
Thanks Skat:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/4/2015 12:08:00 AM
....back to say Congrats, Jan, and am pleased at your double whammy of getting your voice heard on the local media. The healing power of words.... Viv x
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Date: 8/4/2015 3:02:00 AM
Could call it poetic justice Mr Viv - if it wasn't for this poem I would never have got interviewed - will let you know when it is aired - hope it sounds ok - thank goodness it is being edited lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/3/2015 9:10:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/4/2015 3:01:00 AM
Thanks Eve - i didn't know it had been finalised - am delighted to have done so well:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/31/2015 8:36:00 AM
Such a harsh and cruel experience........powerful write Jan ...
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Date: 7/31/2015 9:04:00 AM
It was a terrible experience Joseph .. but something amazing has happened as a result - i sent this to the local radio station who were doing an item on parents smacking their children - even though ti was slightly off topic it has been posted on their facebook page and I have been asked to go there on Monday so they can interview me about my poetry journey - I think justice has been done! hugs jan xx
Date: 7/30/2015 10:32:00 AM
Loved this, I can see you used a fake name for the teacher, as I can surely guess the real name!!!! :)
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Date: 7/30/2015 11:23:00 AM
ha ha ha Arthur - I am waiting for a writ lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/29/2015 2:49:00 AM
Excellent take on this bell topic, Jan. That's an experience that you'll never forget. I spent most of my life in schools, yet the sound of school bells ringing is something that I always hated!! Hugs // paul
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/29/2015 6:53:00 AM
The sound of a single hand bell ringing brings back this memory... schooldays the happiest of your life ... I reserve my judgement on that one:-( Hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/28/2015 8:15:00 PM
Interesting way to take this from the title, which fits it so well. Excellent storytelling as it is not hard at all to slip into the shoes of the characters. Just not the black one, please!
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Date: 7/29/2015 1:25:00 AM
Thanks so much for the lovely comment Isaiah: Hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/28/2015 4:53:00 PM
Wow!!! Sounds like my third grade teacher Ms. Carlin at public school. Lol. She used the yard stick!!! God bless you!!! Good luck in the contest!!!
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Yolanda Scott
Date: 7/29/2015 12:11:00 AM
Just wow!!! Bless mum heart!!! Wishing you well!!!
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Date: 7/28/2015 5:07:00 PM
I was just 5 years old on my first day at school Yolanda - my mum is 92 yet remembers the incident so so clearly - I was telling her about the poem - she said oh Yes it was Nigel Kempster who was the ringleader ! hugs jan xx
Date: 7/28/2015 3:39:00 PM
Glad that it has eased your pain a little more, Jan. I was told at senior school that if I ever got the cane, to put an exercise book down the back of my pants, so I did. The Deputy Head told me to hold my hand out. Bastard...... oh, well, it never emotionally scarred me, but now I can speed read through my bumhole. Viv x
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Date: 7/28/2015 3:45:00 PM
LOL Mr Viv - thanks for making me smile:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/28/2015 9:25:00 AM
Thank you, Jan. I may do just that. Thank you for telling me. I kind of felt I said one word too many. PS. I already attached the tributed poet's pic. hugs!
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Date: 7/28/2015 9:31:00 AM
Ohh will drop by i wonder if my hunch will be right:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/28/2015 8:14:00 AM
Another surprise, Jan, and a heartfelt one. So strange that you wrote this one my sister was just telling me a couple of days ago of her incident in a catholic school with the nuns. I guess we all have bad experience with teachers which should have never teach. a 7 love Hugs Eve
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/28/2015 11:45:00 AM
Mum had a fall in the street in 2009 - 2 bleeds on her brain - she inspires me - few people would have got through the way she has:-) hugs jan xx
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/28/2015 9:46:00 AM
that is what I hear of dementia & alzheimer my dad did the same thing but he had parkinson and the dementia is activated my the medication is what I heard
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/28/2015 9:07:00 AM
Eve I've just been telling mum about my poem - she remembers what happened all too well - she said to me - the son's name was Nigel - her short term memory is poor her memory of the past - spot on! :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/28/2015 7:56:00 AM
I can relate, when I was a kid I was the recipient of a lot of discipline at school. Mind you I didn't have a safe place to go home to. This should do well in the contest.
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Date: 7/28/2015 9:03:00 AM
Its a horrible situation - I was telling mum about my poem today - she remembers what happened all to vividly! Hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/28/2015 4:48:00 AM
Hello Jan!! Good Luck in the contest with you entry here. This one's sad for sure. I grew up in the 1950s in Kansas where the discipline tended to be strict because of the Bible Belt orientation. Your story here brings back poignant memories of those times when I was a little kid. I do understand the message of the trauma here. These are events that none of us can forgot, no matter how old we are and how long we live. A "7" for sure. Best Always, Gary
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Date: 7/28/2015 4:57:00 AM
It was the fact her son was the instigator but happily sat and let us take the rap for it - can still see his moonfaced smirk. it is funny I went on the web yesterday and someone gave a glowing tribute to this woman - of course my view of her was totally different! hugs jan xx
Date: 7/28/2015 1:19:00 AM
I love true accounts Jan. What an impression to leave you with all of these years. Sad that teacher will never realize the harm she inflicted. A wonderful entry for the contest that is sure to move Debbie too. 7
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Date: 7/28/2015 4:17:00 AM
It would never happen these days Connie in fact it has turned full circle and I have experience of colleagues being hit by pupils:-9 hugs jan xx
Date: 7/27/2015 8:45:00 PM
Traumatic experiences really leave an indelible mark in a child's soul. Today, that lady would have faced admin and criminal case. Good that you wrote about it. Happened to me too.I was 11 by then. The teacher was abusive of her authority so I led a walkout! We were fetched and given 2 strikes each! Mom complained, same case, nothing happened. The following year the principal saw me wearing a different uniform, and told me I should have told her of my plan to transfer. Duh? Gloodluck, Jan! hugs!
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Date: 7/28/2015 4:15:00 AM
No worries Kim - sorry i brought back memories for you - i started to tell my hubby about the poem but he wouldn't read it - he knew I'd been hit and how traumatic it was for me to actually write the poem - I never realised how therapeutic writing was - until my own life changed with my husband's cancer:-) hugs jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/27/2015 8:49:00 PM
I was just 5 years old when this happened Kim - thankfully it would never be allowed to happen nowadays - the memory will remain with me forever:-( hugs jan xx
Date: 7/27/2015 8:11:00 PM
G'day Jan... unjust moments tend to live with us forever Jan. This is a great yarn from the days when a teacher could actually be feared - regards - Lindsay
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/27/2015 8:16:00 PM
I had respect for the teachers at school - yes was scared of them - Even now I cannot call the headmaster at the school I work at 'Sir' - it is a mark of respect and he knows I feel uncomfortable calling him by his christian name guess its just the way we were brought up!:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/27/2015 7:42:00 PM
Gosh, things sure have changed since "our day" Today you would have a nice little law suit for THAT horrid actions of your teacher. VERY good writing. I bet Debs loves this.
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Date: 7/27/2015 7:46:00 PM
I wasn't sure how apt it was for the contest but I was happy to go out on a limb - thanks for the vote of confidence I really do appreciate your comment:-) hugs Jan xx
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