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For What I Pray

Sometimes I feel as if I’m stuck in a bottomless cavern of infinite blackness. The hope of my youth, which was boundless, is endless no more. My greatest desire is simply to feel whole - the way I felt so many years ago when possibilities seemed limitless and the future was a string of Christmas lights shining and unbroken. Today small miseries seem everlasting. How they goad me! To an eternal God I pray for answers - for myself as well as for others in the world. I pray for more than even hope. June 8, 2021 For the Writing Prompt - Endless - Poetry Contest of Constance La France Submitted July 10, 2021 for 'A BRIAN STRAND JULY 12' Poetry Contest

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Date: 10/1/2021 4:51:00 AM
Hope ..based on assurance ..promised .Andrea
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Date: 7/11/2021 5:48:00 PM
Brilliant, a great write Andrea... Congratulations on your placement in the contests
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Date: 7/11/2021 4:42:00 PM
Wonderful write. I love it. Congrats. God bless you. Love, Gina
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Date: 6/19/2021 12:39:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Endless - Challenge with this wonderful and emotional poem, love _Constance
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Date: 6/13/2021 10:38:00 AM
I am here again to congratulate you on your beautiful poem. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/11/2021 9:17:00 AM
Andrea, I feel your yearnings for a more gentle, innocent time, when hope was a hopeful expectation, and love was the substitute for fear. You have a young heart in an old world. What a great poem. So well written. So thought-provoking. Another winner. Luv, Bryan
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Date: 6/11/2021 6:03:00 AM
Hope when suffering is not enough. You need out of the pain. Hugs...well said.
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Date: 6/10/2021 4:12:00 PM
Well said Andrea. When all else fails it's good to know that God is in charge of everything and whatever happens it will be alright. God Bless my friend. JB
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Date: 6/10/2021 4:06:00 PM
Well said and well written Andrea. Yes God hears and knows all our sorrows and thoughts. love phyl
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Date: 6/9/2021 11:49:00 AM
love this thought provoking write
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Date: 6/8/2021 8:32:00 PM
Andrea, Yeah, I know what you mean. You gave me a good idea, I think I'll have another Christmas of lights on July 2nd. -Richard
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Date: 6/8/2021 1:22:00 PM
To simply feel whole--well said Andrea. May your prayers be answered! Many can relate to the sentiments you expressed.
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Date: 6/8/2021 10:38:00 AM
Your poetic genius just flows throughout this well penned verse dear Andrea... Yes dear friend... we all have small miseries....There is NO one in this world without a suffering...I know you do pray for you as well as everyone...I hope God hears your prayers... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 6/8/2021 9:02:00 AM
Brilliant write. All words in their right place. I wrote one but I think I will not enter the contest. Might change my mind. Yours is brilliant. Hugs.
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Date: 6/8/2021 7:02:00 AM
Amen. Nicely penned, Andrea. Certainly would not add anything to that:)
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