For Tim - With a Wink

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Early morning hours: Rain bans the sun Mist drives out knowledge and invites random different reflections ideas, hypotheses suppositions Little critters or birds, squirrels lawnmowerman some friends with persisting incredibly annoying loyal persuasion, do not give up Until you frustrated grab your book, flee to the library: silence solitude, but still sneakily with love and a smile *** June 1, 2017 Copyright © Darren White

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 6/3/2017 4:36:00 AM

Top of the Afternoon Darren. You bet. Once the book and pages are opened and turned the critters disappear and all is right within the world. This is excellent expression formatting and layout. All of it. A wonderful tribute for Tim. Wonderful entirely and completely. PS: the birds dear penguin never give up. (lol and lol again)

Darren White
Date: 6/3/2017 9:17:00 AM

We lol and we lol again :) Don't we all love to read, and have friends :)

Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 6/2/2017 7:45:00 AM

What a wonderful poem. I loved the 'persisting incredibly annoying loyal persuasion' that don't give up :) Amitiés

Darren White
Date: 6/2/2017 8:15:00 AM

I belong to that group, and still he loves me :)

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 6/2/2017 3:51:00 AM

This is wonderful, my friend - marvelous flow, and such wonderful shape! Love it - seven for sure!

Darren White
Date: 6/2/2017 4:05:00 AM

Happy you love it :)

Sanket Jain

Date: 6/1/2017 9:48:00 PM

First of all Thanks for your inspiring, kind, soft fingers. Your view is an inspiration for me & Pari Style. This poem is indeed a good one. Pictorial depiction is appreciated. Above comparison. Excellent and classical poem. Beautiful words whispers beautiful heart widely.

Darren White
Date: 6/2/2017 1:07:00 AM

Thank you so much for a wonderful review :)