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For My Love

There is still snow on the ground, and birds in trees make their sound; I lay blooms with a sad sigh- with grief and tears I am drowned. __________________________ March 9, 2020 Poetry/Jueju/For My Love Copyright Protected, ID 20-1234-209-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the contest, Let The Pens Flow sponsor, Jenish Somadas Second Place

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Janice Canerdy

Date: 4/4/2020 9:04:00 AM

Lovely and moving, Constance. CONGRATS! Janice

Constance La France
Date: 4/4/2020 10:27:00 AM

Janice, thanks for the compliment and congrats _Constance

Jc Hawkens

Date: 4/4/2020 5:19:00 AM

I can feel the emotions coming through your words—beautifully written Constance. Congratulations on your win. JC Hawkens

Constance La France
Date: 4/4/2020 10:27:00 AM

JC, thank you so much for the lovely comment and congratulations _Constance

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2020 4:34:00 PM

this is superb poetry, Dear Heart. Congratulations on your win.

Constance La France
Date: 4/4/2020 10:28:00 AM

Andrea, thanks for the superb and the congratulations _Constance

Paul Callus

Date: 4/2/2020 4:26:00 PM

Back again :) Congratulations!! Regards // paul

Constance La France
Date: 4/4/2020 10:28:00 AM

Paul, thanks for the congratulations !

Curtis Johnson

Date: 4/2/2020 12:13:00 PM

Congrats, my friend. Good work.

Constance La France
Date: 4/2/2020 12:44:00 PM

Curtis, thanks for the congrats and compliment _Constance

Jenish Somadas

Date: 4/2/2020 11:12:00 AM

Emotions flowing through each words..Congrats on your wonderful win Constance..

Constance La France
Date: 4/2/2020 12:44:00 PM

Jenish, thank you for another inspiring contest and for my placement, appreciate _Constance

Paul Callus

Date: 3/16/2020 9:42:00 AM

Much sadness seeps out of these few lines, Constance. Stopping by to reread...and to comment (I forgot to first time round) Regards // paul

Constance La France
Date: 3/17/2020 12:38:00 PM

Paul, thanks for visiting and commenting on my poem _Constance

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/11/2020 5:44:00 PM

Excellent in this form. I need to redo mine. I think I did it abab pattern!!!

Constance La France
Date: 3/11/2020 7:52:00 PM

Andrea, thanks for the visit and the excellent _Constancde

Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/11/2020 7:26:00 AM

Am very touched by your fine poem. P ROMIOS

Constance La France
Date: 3/11/2020 9:15:00 AM

Panagiota, thanks for visiting and for the sweet comment _Constance

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/9/2020 3:45:00 PM

So poignantly delicate and heartfelt my friend.

Constance La France
Date: 3/10/2020 6:31:00 PM

Caren, thank you for the comment _Constance

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/9/2020 11:46:00 AM

What a powerful and emotional poem dear, Dear Heart. A real jem!

Constance La France
Date: 3/10/2020 6:32:00 PM

Demetrios, thank you for visiting my poem and for the compliment, appreciate _Constance

John Watt

Date: 3/9/2020 11:07:00 AM

Constance, this is so touching and real - I can relate to this. Thank you for putting your sadness into words that others can benefit in their time of grief. Hugs ~ John

Constance La France
Date: 3/10/2020 6:34:00 PM

John, I am sorry for your friends loss, even when expected it is tragic, I just lost a cousin to cancer, she fought a brave and courageous battle till the end _Constance

John Watt
Date: 3/9/2020 11:54:00 AM

That is how you know your love was true to the core, my Dear Heart. My friend just lost her daughter last week to cancer. Expected, but still tragic. She is a poetess too, and knows the power of words to help grieve and heal.

Constance La France
Date: 3/9/2020 11:27:00 AM

John, thanks for visiting and for the compassionate comment, I can write of my sorrow a thousand times, a million times but the grief never, ever departs, someone asked me "How long will you grieve him?" And the answer is till I draw my last breath _Constance