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For My Father

...to My Dad As I strolled through my hoemtown I saw the people who possessed me, who beat me down and held me up, who tickled me and trounced me, formed and shaped this fledgling child. Full aware of their manipulations, stations of the Cross, or as temptations for transgression, they were my lifelines, baiting me, or bonding me to morals, some would stick, and some would splinter. Too soon my father passed away. Oft I'd meet him as I wandered, more than any other wraith, we smoked cigarettes and chatted, solid body, apparition. Significant exchanges, the channels of his wisdom broadened those of this young lad, and I expanded 'til perspective took its hold. There will be more, 'til I am singular and bold!

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Date: 1/26/2016 12:18:00 PM
Your reflections are well expressed within these lines Keith. Enjoyable read. Cheers, Craig
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/26/2016 12:27:00 PM
Many thanks my friend! Keith
Date: 1/25/2016 9:28:00 AM
I was worried that when my father died that he might then come back and haunt me. Fortunately he did not venture to visit me from beyond his grave.
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/25/2016 9:55:00 AM
This was poetic license on my part... just my way of remembering my dad. Thanks Richard... Best wishes, Keith
Date: 1/24/2016 9:38:00 PM
Well done. Invokes images of walking through town ducking to avoid some whilst hailing others.
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/25/2016 7:06:00 AM
Thanks Kelli...
Date: 1/24/2016 7:33:00 PM
Yes the people we meet, both the good ones and the bad, all had a hand in shaping who we are today... A deeply reflective poem that I think most of us can relate to in some way. Great work, Keith!
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