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For Chan Hurst - a Life Too Brief

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I didn't know Chan Hurst a.k.a. Just That Archaic Poet. I made it a point to go back and read a lot of his poetry. I also read his own bio. I found his art and short stories. I learned that he was a musician, poet, writer and artist. I read all the tributes I could find from people who knew him here. He was loved respected and admired. I wrote my piece as if it were one of his collages like this one just below.

With these twelve words... art has no restrains  there is nothing that can chain it down no fabric that can not be broken from. *FoRm? >that de...pe...nd...s.< WHAT duz iT reSEMble fOrM doth [come {inallshapes) AND sizes! "pun,ctu?a:ti-o;n!? proper,? maybe"! ,maybe. not' another language? je ne sais pas, throw  it in and try. no Geek gets on a computer and  wonders what the rules are it's their fingers singing on the keyboard makes them Euphoric not the stops  that would enslave them. John Ronald Reuel Tolkien translated Beowulf in the nineteen-twenties he himself never published it. Writers write. Writers? Brothers real and sisters pure. Whether a rhymer or  a  clever charmer  with words you scorch accept the handed torch. your artistry in question? but it is your lifeline awakens your senses you feel alive. pick up that guitar... remember when the strings sliced ...like razor blades drew the blood you painted with ...a collage Star Wars in the background  your name etched in the foreground... it was you ...you were it only the optical counted "damn the torpedoes full speed ahead"... these twelve words, yes but also you were so much more than that your heart in every write and in every write music oh how your words did sing, still speak in harmony. In the night sky like a Pentagram  a single star burns bright! In the background  there is a galaxy, in the foreground the artists name, it reads Chan Hurst! A new beginning Rest In Peace. Maurice Yvonne 15~11~2014 Sponsor: Cyndi MacMillan Contest Name: A WORD COLLAGE FOR CHAN HURST

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Date: 12/14/2014 12:29:00 PM
well deserved first place Maurice:-) hugs jan xxx
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Date: 12/13/2014 7:25:00 PM
Much enjoyed. A fav & a 7 - I do believe you did get Chan! Happy Holy Days. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 12/12/2014 11:00:00 AM
Thank you for this dedication and your commitment to Soup Family; for you to have gone this far is a convinction of how real good you are; congrats on the win Maurice...huggs
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Date: 12/11/2014 11:27:00 PM
I just love how you put this one together. a poem that really deserved to be on this list. BIG congrats, Maurice.
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Date: 12/11/2014 8:49:00 AM
A lovely tribute and a great write and win ...Congrats
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Date: 12/11/2014 8:06:00 AM
My personal Favorite! Congratulations!
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Date: 11/18/2014 1:34:00 PM
Dear Maurice, Chan must have been loved by many. Your tribute and others I read show how much he was admired. I wish you success in everything you do, Maurice, including poetry. You always touch my heart with your gracious comments. Wish my health allowed me to spend more time online. Sending hugs to you, Carolyn
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Date: 11/18/2014 11:13:00 AM
Maurice, this is by far the best tribute I have read! Cheers, Roy
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Date: 11/18/2014 7:48:00 AM
My personal favorite of the ones I have read so far. Bravo Maurice!
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Date: 11/17/2014 2:59:00 PM
How he would have loves this Maurice! Light & Love
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Date: 11/16/2014 7:15:00 PM
Stimulating! I am inspired to look up Chan Hurst now. I have been a member ot the American Tolkien Society since 1985. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 11/15/2014 11:29:00 PM
This reminds me of Chan in many ways. He was a master of word play and rhyme, but the heart and soul also had to be there in the words. He seemed to be everywhere at once, doing as much as he could, almost as if he knew that he was running out of time.... I think this is a nice tribute for Chan. You've done very well with this challenge, Maurice!
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Date: 11/15/2014 1:03:00 PM
You have done something wonderful with those twelve words, Maurice. I love how it came down to "these twelve words, yes, but also...." and how you tied this one up and said, "it reads Chan Hurst/ a new beginning!!!" I can see him burning brightly in the heavens. I know this judge's taste in poetry. She is going to go wild over this one!!! soupmail.
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Date: 11/15/2014 1:03:00 PM
Also it was so nice of you to display one of his collages.
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Date: 11/15/2014 9:16:00 AM
I was totally placed into the mind of the writer when I read this, absolutely perfect writing, well done.
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Date: 11/15/2014 8:21:00 AM
So young but full of life -- how many times have I stopped doing something because I was afraid what someone might think . . . your poem is a great tribute to Chan Hurst and an encouragement to us all. Live Life -- Live it with passion and abundantly!!
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Date: 11/15/2014 8:18:00 AM
Great write Maurice - I didn't know Chan so feel I cant write a tribute poem but am enjoying the work of others:-) Hugs jan x
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