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Her Unborn Child

As a brilliant bulb lights up the room, a woman weeps as consciousness slips. And white on white adds glare to the gloom as fear spills freely from mumbling lips. As guilt seeps into nightmarish dreams, her pregnancy has her nerves on hooks. And tears culminate in silent screams, bullied by scorn and accusing looks. There's no escaping the shame she feels, ending the life of her unborn child. Though she fell in love head over heels, she was cruelly ravaged and defiled. A chill penetrates her very core as her broken heart struggles to cope. For when a life ends; it is no more, nothing’s left inside, not even hope. (Quatrain) 4/18/2017

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Date: 5/25/2018 9:40:00 PM
Well penned, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/26/2018 8:31:00 AM
Thank you so much Line, your comments are much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/3/2017 9:43:00 AM
wow. this is absolutely incredible. i've always wanted to write a poem based on this subject, but couldn't find words powerful enough. i am a feminist, i am also pro-life. this is so powerful, especially the second to last paragraph. amazingly written! <3 ~you are beautiful
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Date: 5/3/2017 11:30:00 AM
Darci, your comments are heartfelt and compassionate, I thank you for your support, Emile.
Date: 4/25/2017 11:16:00 PM
Wow very powerful indeed
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Date: 4/26/2017 9:59:00 AM
Thank you so much Pashang, your comments are much appreciated, Emile.
Date: 4/23/2017 12:16:00 PM
Such a lovely poem highlighting the pain that single woman goes through while pregnancy . Loved it.
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Date: 4/23/2017 2:38:00 PM
Thank you so much Joyeeta, your comments are much appreciated, Emile.
Date: 4/19/2017 10:43:00 AM
My, my, my! This aptly captures the pains of pregnant women, who for different reasons are faced with making abortion an option and the hopelessness and helplessness of the unborn child in all of this. The theme is very bold. I really, really love this. Sandison
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Date: 4/19/2017 11:37:00 AM
Thank you so much Sandison, your comments are much appreciated, Emile.
Date: 4/18/2017 5:32:00 PM
Well-executed, from all points of view. The "woman" is as innocent as me, or has been isolated by culture.Our Bible says we, humans, are equal-opportunity sinners, present tense and in the past. Those who do not/didn't choose abortion,R "moral" because of their environment.Immigrants didn't choose abortion before coming to US.I met dads who wept years after wives chose abortion because we made it legal & socially acceptable.Blame each level of government. Republicans do abortion too!
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Date: 4/19/2017 9:50:00 AM
Thanks Anil, your comments are sincere and genuine. Emile.
Date: 4/18/2017 4:14:00 PM
Emile your poem has such a profound message. There is always another path and someone to help if sought out, on this populated planet. Every little life with their silent tiny voice cries out to live. Adoption laws need to be changed to accept older couples who want to give their love to a little unwanted babe. 7 ; )
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/19/2017 9:49:00 AM
Connie, your comments are heartfelt and compassionate, I thank you my friend, Emile.

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