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Footprints

Footprints, like DNA, or handwriting, are more than simply a map of where you've been, or the direction you're heading out. For many years, my right footprint was skewed, with edges as obscure as the details of those dreams that float through consciousness just before sleep fades into light. A January surgery—performed by a high-dollar specialist— put me in a freakish two-ton boot for so many weeks, my hip went out. But my footprints are so un-notched you could track me in the snow, and never know who you followed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/4/2014 2:55:00 AM
A lovely piece. I really like it a lot. Well put together Cona. Have a blessed day. Hugs "B
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Cona Adams
Date: 11/4/2014 5:56:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading, and for stopping by to comment. I will certainly return the favor.
Date: 11/3/2014 9:08:00 PM
i love this one, cona - especially the ending! (i hope your hip is all better...)
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Cona Adams
Date: 11/4/2014 5:48:00 AM
Thanks for the comment, Ilene. Yes, everything is A-Okay. It's marvelous what the doctors can do these days.You just need a side job to pay the bill.
Date: 11/3/2014 3:03:00 PM
Great dream dear...It touched my consciousness...I enjoyed it with multiple meanings...Best to you....
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Cona Adams
Date: 11/3/2014 3:20:00 PM
Thank you, Sandip, for reading and commenting on my poem. Much appreciated.

Book: Shattered Sighs