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Fade To Gray

To gaze back upon footprints of my time And see the prints so shallow fade to gray As they dissolve and leave no trace behind I'll hesitate to look beyond the day When standing straight is a moment treasured And hair once full is now a thin disguise When my skin gains spots and wrinkles measured I still smile every morning when I rise When nothings real but passing time I live And every deed pressed to my heart inlaid I struggle with the things I must forgive Before the mental photographs all fade I'll watch the children of my heart at play Before my footprints slowly fade away 2/7/14

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Date: 9/27/2021 10:03:00 AM
Such perfect cadence, Frederick: Wonderful depiction of growing older. Best, Suzanne
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Date: 5/6/2021 10:08:00 AM
Frederic, congratulations on your win. Your wording and descriptions of adding more candles to your cake are so unique and creative. All the best.
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Date: 5/4/2021 8:28:00 AM
The marks most of us leave on our planet truly are eradicated by time, Frederic. Enjoyed the way you described the aging process -- hair thinning, wrinkles and sunspots. (Lines 2 and 9 had 11 syllables according to howmanysyllables.com.) Otherwise, a lovely sonnet. There were many extraordinary poems in this contest. Congratulations on a well-deserved win! And thank you for supporting the contest. Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 5/16/2016 9:07:00 AM
An amazing Sonnet, Frederick. Every day is another blessing and we must be thankful to take another step forward. My sentiments too. Congratulations on your placement in this Premiere Contest. 7+Fav, Sandra
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Date: 5/16/2016 2:01:00 AM
How marvellous!! Congrats on your amazing win!! :) :)
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Date: 5/15/2016 7:58:00 PM
Love the sonnet....I am having a sonnet contest, check it out,,,,,Congratulations on your placement in the contest
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Date: 5/15/2016 3:28:00 PM
Congratulations Frederic on the placement of the contest
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Date: 5/22/2014 1:05:00 PM
Frederic.. Thank you for supporting one of my latest contest. Stop by and enjoy my latest blog ENCORE" if you'd like. Always & Forever <3 LINDA ;-)
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Date: 2/7/2014 4:11:00 PM
- Frederic, this is both beautiful and a little sad - your footsteps will never die for your loved ones- I wish you a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Frederic Parker
Date: 2/7/2014 10:06:00 PM
Thank you Anne for your kind response, as one ages sadness is easier to reflect on..as long as it doesn't consume....you too have a nice weekend

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