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Fool's Gold

I keep in mind, what I want a true friend to be. Someone who proves they are loyal to me To know that honesty, is part of who they are. They will travel life's journey with you, no matter how far. They see you, the real you, the bad and the good, They know what you are all about, it's understood. A heart of pure gold, is what you hope to find. Not an imposter, or the "fool's gold" kind.

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Date: 9/23/2018 4:29:00 PM
Another beautiful poem. The topic is amazing, as finding friends has become so difficult those years. In the good times or bad times, is when u can discover who is your friend. Sometimes a word from a real friend can change ones day or night. For me i don't expect not to be disappointed. Keep writing, you are really and truly a wonderful writer. Bravo. Love Terry xoxo
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 9/23/2018 10:00:00 PM
Terry, thank you so much for your wonderful comments! They are truly appreciated. You are right about friends and their effect on you in the course of a day. I have learned to expect nothing, though it isn't easy. We learn from experience, unfortunately. Thank you, again!
Date: 6/30/2018 10:14:00 AM
So I see the comments below. It was John who did this act of kindness!!
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 6/30/2018 12:10:00 PM
Yes, the kind stranger is John. It is so nice to have someone reach out in kindness, especially in today's world.
Date: 6/30/2018 10:13:00 AM
Wow, this is so nice. Friendship can come so swiftly! Congrats on your awesome win.
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 6/30/2018 12:02:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea, You are right, it sometimes sneaks up on you.
Date: 6/27/2018 4:06:00 PM
This touched my heart. Beautifully written, sincerity comes thru. Congratulations on your top win!
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 6/27/2018 10:56:00 PM
Thank you, Susan It means so much when what you are trying to convey in your poem comes through. And thank you for the congrats.
Date: 6/27/2018 8:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Faux
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 6/27/2018 2:33:00 PM
Thank you, Faux for your congrats. Always appreciated.
Date: 6/26/2018 4:06:00 PM
I feel the same way about friendship Sandra. You have conveyed so beautifully what true friendship means. Congratulations on your wonderful deserving second Placement! : )
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 6/27/2018 2:35:00 PM
Thank you, Connie, I am in good company!
Date: 6/26/2018 2:25:00 PM
what a lovely uplifting poem Sandra, I hope you have loyal honest friends like you describe and i love your tribute, there are so lovely people on the site:-) hugs jan xx
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 6/27/2018 2:31:00 PM
Thank you, Jan When we go through difficult times in our lives, sometimes friends are unable to ride it out with you. I haved lived it but I do have those friends that are supportive throughout, that is a true gift.
Date: 6/26/2018 2:00:00 PM
Ahh such a lovely poem this is, believe me that everyone deserves to have atleast one true friend in their lives and by true friend I mean the type of person you have described in your poem, it certainly was a joy to read, and I will agree with you that poetrysoup sure is a place full of nice peoples who are always friendly and ready to help, many many congratulations on your win in the contest,
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 6/27/2018 2:24:00 PM
Thank you, Faraz for your kind comment. I think as we go through life, we learn to value a true friendship more and more. I am glad you enjoyed this poem.
Date: 6/26/2018 1:33:00 PM
Congrats! A beutiful poem. I would love to have a friend like this. Also so nicely said someone reaching out.
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 6/26/2018 1:45:00 PM
Thank you so much Haley, I appreciate your comment and congrats. Always a thrill to win.
Date: 6/26/2018 12:20:00 PM
Sandy, a big congrats to you on this wonderful poem! John
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 6/26/2018 1:30:00 PM
Am still in shock, didn't expect this one. It does make you feel so good, that your poem was thought to be good enough to win. I stll can't believe that I write poetry, let alone win a contest with it. It has been a gift when I needed it the most. And now, the rest is history!!! ( just kidding) Thank you for being part of this.
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 6/26/2018 1:25:00 PM
Thank you, John, My friend and Kind Stranger! So excited, 2 winners, and you are part of both of them. Congrats to us!
Date: 6/26/2018 11:37:00 AM
Sandra, big congratulations on your second-place win in the contest! The qualities in friends you describe so beautifully are important. Please send a Soup mail to me providing your address so I can send a prize to you. Thank you for supporting the contest with this touching poem. Hugs, Carolyn
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 6/26/2018 12:16:00 PM
THANK YOU so much!!! I am thrilled and surprised, This is the first time that I have wriiten a theme based poem for a contest, and I really enjoyed writing it. With only 3 places, I was not expecting this. Thank you for honoring my poem with a big win!!
Date: 6/16/2018 5:10:00 PM
Very nice Sandra. This brings comfort :)
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 6/16/2018 6:04:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi. Comfort is a something that I am trying to bring to my poems, it is not evident in many of them. Thank you again, I always appreciate your insightful comments.

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