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Flowers In The Ocean

Still  naked 
small speck  burning 
double clicked  attention 
wading through the light 

free fall fasting 
lying half asleep 

Vinyl wraps round the beauty 
meanders with the breeze 
grasping for a sleeping angel 
found lost in perfect harmony 

Slipping through the window 
heading for your seams 
breathing  curiosity 
hidden in your dreams 

free falling fast 
lying half asleep 

Filling up tomorrow 
such a pretty being 
flowers in the ocean 
such a pretty thing

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/2/2017 10:28:00 AM
Beautiful poem.
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Date: 8/29/2017 2:11:00 PM
You must have been in deep thoughts when writing this poem. It is beautifully written. Did the hurricane come your way? Are you alright? Have a good day my friend.
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Date: 8/23/2017 3:06:00 PM
- The title "Flowers In The Ocean" ... my first thought was ... flowers to someone who died in the sea - a lovely thing to do - Great written with thoughts of flowers, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/23/2017 1:04:00 PM
Poetry dance :)
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Date: 8/22/2017 10:08:00 PM
I really liked the last verse, great write!
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Date: 8/22/2017 8:04:00 PM
wake up sleepyhead.......Seren
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Date: 8/22/2017 10:30:00 AM
Tim, I seldom understand your words but I do love the way you put them together.
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Dean Wood
Date: 8/22/2017 10:43:00 AM
Much better!
Date: 8/22/2017 9:53:00 AM
Entertaining verse Tim...even if you were half asleep lol...p.s. about them shirts...soup mail me if you were serious...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 8/22/2017 9:32:00 AM
I'm a titch lost in some of these lines, but you give pause for thought. I just don't know what I should be thinking lol
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Date: 8/22/2017 9:05:00 AM
Its very deep--love the ending!
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