Breaching Through the Skin

Flirtatiously, a pod of whales breach through the skin of the coy, shy sea!

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Mario Vitale

Date: 12/11/2019 7:24:00 PM

"Really hits home to all unknown parts. Awake to the tenndency to dream to sing a tender song. As the tender lying of the fawn out on the lawm. Words that breath a nostalgic portion in its meaning. You have created a charming presentation to its flow. First off i like the line pattern to this remarkable piece. Words can uplift these are touching that you exhibit. Further, you have given a chance for the reader to breath. Let go of any harm that may come up. Very deep piece you got here. Lastly, you covered all bases very good. Poet Mario William Vitale First off you have used a great deal of grammar that is simplistic to taste. I liked the flow. Further, you have grown in your work as an artist type poet. Really liking your work. Words of nicely woven linguistic terms. Fashioned in a great experience type work you got here. Try reaching out to your fan base it may surprise you."

Mario Vitale

Date: 10/2/2017 3:58:00 PM

https://youtu.be/sjnGtH7Oxjg Would you be so kind as to check out my newest poem entitled, "A Secret Place". It has been a work in progress since the fall of 1989 my email is : mariovitale227@yahoo.com. I'm featured on writerscafe, neopoet, all poetry, starlitfecafe and power poetry. Thank you kindly poet Mario William Vitale. 10/2/17