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Flickering Candle Light -Win

The prevailing light encircled by darkness I hear whispers of light in night’s calmness A choir warbling bidding out “Iris! Iris” That engrossed look, rapt delight of Iris. Flickering and playing she gleams And with it my hopes and dreams gleam In light it dances and sways left and right Like my Iris swayed in my arms in delight Like a ballerina she dances casting shadows on walls Reflecting its beauty thro’ the windows of my soul The flame casting its light, enlightening the darkness What a symbol to embrace in night’s calmness.
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Date 2-20-14 Dr. Ram Mehta Form : Rhyme Second Place Win Contest: Impress Me by Giorgio V. Motif: Romantic

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Date: 3/29/2014 4:13:00 PM
Hi Dr. , Congratulations, In Giorgio's Impressing contest... Love ~ SKAT ~
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Date: 3/26/2014 4:12:00 PM
A very romantic write, Dr. Ram. The imagery was described just beautifully. I really enjoyed reading your poem this afternoon. Very nicely done! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem.
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Date: 3/25/2014 12:24:00 PM
Lovely romantic imagery! Congrats on your win, Dr Ram! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/24/2014 10:16:00 PM
Romantic indeed. Congratulations to you, Dr. Ram.
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Date: 3/23/2014 11:15:00 PM
Dr. Ram. Congratulations on your winning placement in Giorgio's contest. Blessings! /l\
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Date: 3/22/2014 2:55:00 PM
- Dr.Ram, congratulations on your fine winning poem in the contest: "February or March 2014 Poem" / / / / Sponsored by: Giorgio A. V. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/23/2014 1:37:00 PM
Dr. Ram an enjoyable read....David
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Date: 2/23/2014 5:12:00 AM
This is inspiring, great and witty! A nice piece for the contest
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Date: 2/22/2014 9:12:00 PM
Dr. Ram a moving and inspiring work I enjoyed the last stanza most of all
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Date: 2/22/2014 3:01:00 PM
- A winning poem ......... so beautifully written Dr. Ram. - Wish you a lovely weekend - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/21/2014 11:54:00 PM
''Like a ballerina she dances casting shadows on walls Reflecting its beauty thro’ the windows of my soul'', you are just too much Dr. ,gl in the contest.
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Date: 2/21/2014 8:26:00 PM
Great write Dr. Ram. Very deep and inspiring. Good luck and thank you!
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Date: 2/21/2014 5:45:00 AM
Nice entry for the contest, thnx for the congrats!!
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Date: 2/20/2014 7:39:00 AM
this is perfect!! ... i can see the light so clearly in each lines...you are the best, Dr. Ram!!! ..^__^ ..oxoxo
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