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shining lights hide the toil of millions in dark alleys. in these dark corners gleaming sweat of men cannot be differentiated from salty vapour of sea. the toilers are used to sparkle and glitter the lives of those who need these lights to protect themselves from dark. the toiling masses, themselves remain in shadows; they get burnt as fuel to generate shimmer for others. this fuel is infinite in supply for it is priced cheap. forced to provide, perpetually the lustre, the dazzle, for others; keeping their own aspirations in shadows; and somehow hoping to be redeemed, some day, one day. for only this thin, trembling ray of hope is their own flicker. 5.10.2014

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Date: 6/20/2020 6:57:00 AM
Congrats on your winning poem and blessings sent your way with love, Gina
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/20/2020 7:06:00 AM
Gina, nice to see your visit. Thanks for appreciating and your love and blessings. Best. Mohan
Date: 6/18/2020 8:46:00 PM
This poem is simply stunning, Mohan. Your potent pen brings the desperation of the toiling masses to light through the fragility of their own flicker - which is such a powerful finale to this soulful piece. Congratulations on your excellent win with this amazing poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/20/2020 7:04:00 AM
Susan, thankyou for your liking my muse. Hope to continue to see more support from you. Best. Mohan
Date: 6/18/2020 5:35:00 AM
It is strange how your muse from old pages still holds the truth of this world. Relevant, touching and honest. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 6/20/2020 7:01:00 AM
sensitivity and choice of words are both important to express one's feelings to an issue. Best. Mohan
Date: 10/6/2014 4:08:00 PM
It's so interesting to see how each poet takes this topic and makes it his own. Good job on being original!!
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