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Flare-Star

Magnificence in motion, merely growing golden Giant globe of fire, glowing more gold emboldened By similarities to the sun and its flares, a Temper surely both share, but nay I decline to witness such beauty For in my life's breath no such duty To beholden me there Life on earth far more fair Oh flare-star, your flair I will not endure, But when my name is called I will be pure.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/9/2011 9:32:00 PM
The whole poem is filled with motion and vivid imagery that is so delightful! A pleasure to read Tim. :)
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Date: 7/29/2011 11:05:00 PM
Very Nice, I luv the details and the expressions of the poem !!!!!
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Date: 7/29/2011 9:44:00 PM
very moving expressions, Tim
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Date: 7/29/2011 7:33:00 AM
very intense and deeply touching lines Tim... uniquely descriptive write..luv last two lines luv..
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