Dis Ease

DIS EASE Sore tooth In truth. Must try. No cry. Brush not. Teeth rot. Too tired. Teeth wired. Mum! Mum! Please come. 26/10/2017

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Date: 10/30/2016 5:07:00 PM

ahhh sounds like a child with bad teeth! A good precautionary footle tale, Jean.

Jean Murray
Date: 10/30/2016 5:24:00 PM

Hi Andrea. Thank you for stopping by.

Date: 10/30/2016 1:36:00 PM

- ..... :))) ...hilarious Jean :))) - Congrats on your great first place in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray
Date: 10/30/2016 2:28:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise.

Date: 10/30/2016 1:19:00 PM

Many congrats on your win Jean I loved this one and the pic that went with it was great:-) hugs jan xx

Jean Murray
Date: 10/30/2016 2:26:00 PM

Thank you for the callenge Jan.

Date: 10/30/2016 10:56:00 AM

my best pal/root canal Fun footlery Jean!

Jean Murray
Date: 10/30/2016 2:25:00 PM

'Twas just some Tom Foolery.

Date: 10/27/2016 12:05:00 AM

I commend you on your footless Jean. I can't seem to write even one. 7 ; )

Jean Murray
Date: 10/27/2016 3:48:00 AM

That's so nice of you to say Connie. It took me a while to get started. It's hard to be bisyllabic, isn't it, when we are used to a larger flow.

Date: 10/26/2016 3:23:00 PM

Footle in mouth dis ease. :)

Jean Murray
Date: 10/26/2016 4:17:00 PM

LOL Paloma.

Date: 10/26/2016 11:39:00 AM

Thanks for reminding me. I better go and get mine from the cup. I left them soaking. Lol

Jean Murray
Date: 10/26/2016 11:49:00 AM

No need to get you wired up then Daniel.

Date: 10/26/2016 11:38:00 AM

I think i'll go brush : )

Jean Murray
Date: 10/26/2016 11:48:00 AM

I can see your pearly whites from here Tim.