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Five Birds

five blue birds are on my porch railing two are fluffing up their pretty feathers the third seems to be sleeping the fourth bird has wings spread to fly away and the fifth is looking at something with interest all the five are the same blue bird yet each is different and unique ____________________ April 12, 2021 Poetry/Verse/Five Birds Copyright Protected, ID 04-1346-650-12 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, All Yours (Apr 14) sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 04/13/2012 First Place

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George Yiorgos Stathakis

Date: 4/19/2021 9:57:00 PM

Loved it. I was able to picture these birds in my mind. And the differences that exist...but not just for birds. Well done. Congratulations Constance!

Constance La France
Date: 4/20/2021 11:18:00 AM

George, thank you for the congratulations and the nice comment, appreciate, love _Constance

David Holmes

Date: 4/15/2021 1:53:00 PM

Constance - I really enjoyed this poem, so beautifully done, congrats on your win David Holmes

Constance La France
Date: 4/15/2021 2:56:00 PM

David, thank you for the compliment and the congrats, appreciate, love _Constance

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/14/2021 1:57:00 PM

Delightful, Constance! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Constance La France
Date: 4/14/2021 10:46:00 PM

Kim, thank you for the compliment and congrats, love _Constance

Rico Leffanta

Date: 4/13/2021 12:00:00 PM

Something mother's tend to notice more than fathers! Aloha! Rico

Constance La France
Date: 4/13/2021 1:22:00 PM

Rico, yes mothers would notice the unique in each, thanks for visiting, love _Constance