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Fisherman(Co-Written With Sara Kendrick)

Swimming, life carefree Net tightens around the school Deliverance, grace May your hook always be cast Where you least expect fish caught Synergism, save These lost fish, grateful intent Catch and release, Life Responsible now Freedom, new life in warm water Breach, spout words, joy, sing School of life, protective school Numbers rise with the right bait Bait, love, nuturance Guide... North Star...The leader Home Reward eternal life Thanks Mom!! you are the Best EVER!! No matter what Ashley says about you!! :)

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 2/21/2010 9:17:00 PM

Dear Doris, Another fine Tantum POEM Bravo YOUNG LADY And YOUR Gracious Mother TOO I assume "ASHLEY" is YOUR Sister YOUR Avid Admirer ALWAYS...HG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/18/2010 7:56:00 PM

A beautiful collaboration write and a stirring and thought provoking Rengay.. another form I have not heard of or used as yet.. u two make a great duo all the way around.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Marty Owens

Date: 2/18/2010 6:05:00 PM

"I will make you fishers of men" Wonderful poem...love your co-writes in the Rengay...Marty

Patricia Opel Jaye

Date: 2/18/2010 2:36:00 PM

What a sheer delight sometimes we as poets tend to write way too many words it can take away from the whole enjoyable insight great work take care Patricia Opel Jaye.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/18/2010 8:20:00 AM

Fish travel in "schools" and are never alone. There have been times I have dreamt of being a grouper. Always, I am warning the others to stay away from the "net" that pulls them into the gas chamber we call air. Spent many years fishing and really enjoyed this one! Love, Carolyn

Dana Hall

Date: 2/18/2010 7:41:00 AM

nice to meet you. Thank you for your support as i am brand new here. I read many of your poems and see your talent. Dana Is there any other way to communicate here or just by posting comments??