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First Love, First Kiss, First Lesson Learned

That first kiss--De-lish! Smooth like Hagendaaz! I was in my fourteenth year, too green to see his flaws. I, the skinny Yankee teen with glasses on her face met the proverbial "preacher's son" (I doubt in God's good grace). On the brink of womanhood that summer, still a child, butter on cob of Iowa corn, I melted when he smiled. He, my best friend's cousin, was older, fun, and tall, entrancing me with teasing eyes and sexy southern drawl. Snuggling in the car's back seat, I got a secret thrill hearing on the radio, "Won't you marry me, Bill?" Adolescent daydreams wrapped in tune of "Wedding Bell Blues," the music, his accomplice, helped him with his ruse. The kisses were delightful though my memory now is dim of the moment when precisely all changed upon his whim. Unhappily, one balmy Alabama night I learned the kisses I enjoyed most with him he later spurned. Soft and playful smooching, I learned while in the South, would be replaced by lustful tongue that slithered in my mouth! (how I felt as a young girl anyway; it takes a special guy to pull off "proper" French kissing AND also the first kind I liked so much!)

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Date: 2/17/2017 10:45:00 AM
Wow! That's great lessons you brought forward here. Fascinating! :)) Congrats!
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Date: 8/8/2012 12:05:00 AM
And this one...loved again reading it!!!
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Date: 8/3/2012 8:07:00 PM
First infatuation...if only we knew what we know now eh Andrea. I love true stories in poetic form....great job! Did you read my poem 'Mystified"?
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Date: 4/19/2011 4:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Andrea in Frank Herrera's contest "First Love". Love, Carol
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Date: 4/17/2011 5:38:00 AM
Many congrats, Andrea : )
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Date: 4/16/2011 1:01:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on your win in the contest:)--kash
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Date: 4/16/2011 5:08:00 AM
Ah! beautiful memories of that kiss,A delightful write here and I liked that southern drawl part.Many Congrats Andrea on your win. love, Gautami
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Date: 4/16/2011 3:44:00 AM
andie heartie! you cutie naughty one, lol!! enjoyed this kissable memoirs with happy congrats on the fine win! :) huggs
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Date: 4/15/2011 7:10:00 PM
The son of a preacher man - man they are the one's ya gotta watch out for.Many congrats on your win, Andrea. Lainie
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Date: 4/15/2011 5:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your memories of your first real kiss and from an older man yet. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/15/2011 4:44:00 PM
Congrats Andrea my friend on your wonderful win in Frank's contest on luv and kisses with this excellent expressive entry luv.. enjoy ..
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Date: 4/15/2011 4:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 4/11/2011 5:51:00 AM
You probably won't miss this early kiss though, Andrea! I remember well my first shy kiss (in Antofagasta, Chile in the early sixties!!). fell in love and wrote letters for seven years when I returned to Europe, but never heard from her since. Now I am getting old many kisses later! Hahaha, not really!! Enjoyed your poem and thank you for your kind comments!...Best of luck for the contest! And have a great week! And thank you for your kind comments!...Gert:)
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Date: 4/10/2011 7:26:00 PM
Love the "vibe" of this poem--really captures the essence of "firsts" --especially with an older, (and therefore more desirable), boy. The line with the butter is brilliant. Cheers, Soulfire
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Date: 4/10/2011 1:23:00 PM
Yikes this reminded me of a not so pleasant make out session lol enjoyed your write and the memories shared.. All smiles as I am off to la la land now ;) Good luck for Frank's contest Andrea, love Wilma
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Date: 4/10/2011 10:23:00 AM
Elegant and delightful.. fun and fantastic .. whimsical and wonderful are your words for this poem Andrea my friend.. great success in Frank's contest though am sure he will totally enjoy .. first kiss ..first love....is wonderful with much experience everlasting luv..
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Date: 4/10/2011 7:35:00 AM
good one Andrea, I think we all have those kinds of memories! it should do well in the contest...I didn't attempt that one - some things are best left in the past haha
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Date: 4/9/2011 1:58:00 PM
You're right. The song was released in 1969 not 1970. I looked it up. Take care, Carolyn
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Date: 4/9/2011 12:47:00 PM
The last verse is sooo funny, Andrea. Really enjoyed the reference to melting like butter on a corn cob. Very creative. I remember the Wedding Bell Blues son and enjoyed it when it was released in the '70s. Best wish for success in Frank's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/9/2011 11:31:00 AM
the last line, french kissing that brings back memoires, something i have done in over 40 years. by the time i first french kiss i had many years of normal kissing. i enjoyed reading this one. thank you for reading Go To Sleep and for your kind comment
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Date: 4/9/2011 11:02:00 AM
You have sketched a fascinating story with the colors of those refreshing days, which always lingers in our memories without ever getting faded. Beautiful write with all the charms of love and romance. My good wishes if it is for a contest and thank you for your ever-precious comments on 'When the earth was in danger'. It is very near to its conclusion. Love and best wishes...Ravindra...Andrea Dietrich
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Date: 4/9/2011 9:29:00 AM
it's those southern drawls we fall for, Willie McKay was from South Carolina, I hung on every word............good one Andrea, best of luck in the contest
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Date: 4/9/2011 8:48:00 AM
Ah!!! This sure brings back memories, Andrea. Lainie
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Date: 4/9/2011 7:51:00 AM
Great story, Andrea, and very romantic : ) Jack
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Date: 4/9/2011 6:15:00 AM
AH Andrea, what nice warm fuzzy heated memory that has taken a warm seat in your heart so nicely... Thanks for sharing it and best of luck in the contest...luv Michael
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