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First Light, So Sweet

Some people love to gaze upon the setting sun but sleep until it’s high each day. They never thrill to unique freshness of the dawn, the sunrise, a resplendent sight, accompanied by shades of red and orange. There’s much to be said for sweet communion with first light. When from my porch I view the dawn, the tone is set for my new day. The sun sends twilight on its way. While sipping coffee, I may yawn-- but not from boredom—as I see the day emerging tint by tint. Soon there is no remaining hint of last night in the day or me. July 18, 2018, entered in Emile Pinet's Dusk or Dawn Contest August 29, 2018, entered in Brian Strand's End August Standard Contest

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Date: 7/19/2018 9:01:00 AM
This one really resonates with me Janice! I used to sleep until the sun was high but no longer and I so love to see the day emerge "tint by tint" excellent write xxoo
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/19/2018 8:04:00 PM
Thanks so much, Mike! Janice
Date: 7/18/2018 6:37:00 AM
Excellent poetry..like a portrait of a beautiful morning unfolding..well done Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/18/2018 7:51:00 AM
Thank you so much, Vijay! Janice
Date: 7/18/2018 2:37:00 AM
Beautiful verse Janice, there is no better time of day. Tom
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/18/2018 7:51:00 AM
Thank you so much! Tom

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