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Painting by Elena Adele Dmitrenko titled "Kiss"

First Kiss Abstract emotions as lips touching lips, magical moments of pleasure and bliss, souls meld together as two hearts eclipse, painted in colors that can’t be dismissed; such are the feelings of love’s virgin kiss. May 28, 2020

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Emilia James

Date: 9/3/2021 3:09:00 PM

I can't remember my first kiss so it couldn't of been that good lol. Another beautiful and tender write John. Hugs, Emilia : )

John Gondolf
Date: 9/4/2021 6:57:00 AM

Sorry your first kiss wasn't a memorable moment, I can remember mine like it was yesterday...and that was 60 years ago! Thank you much for your support, Emilia, I appreciate you. Hugs, John

Funom Makama

Date: 6/8/2020 9:32:00 PM

Most profound expressions of your deep thoughts. A great, great piece!

John Gondolf
Date: 6/9/2020 4:40:00 AM

Thank you, Funom, I appreciate your kind words. John

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/6/2020 5:22:00 PM

Awe, reminisce of my first kiss. John, I like the way you described it, a virgin kiss... nice, Linda

John Gondolf
Date: 6/6/2020 8:11:00 PM

Thank you for your thoughts, Linda, there are some moments in our lives that we never forget. All the best. John

Arturo Michael

Date: 6/1/2020 6:00:00 PM

I still remember the many emotions of that first kiss... the touch, the smell... Nice one here

John Gondolf
Date: 6/2/2020 5:04:00 AM

Thanks, Arturo, I remember mine like it was yesterday...the taste of lipstick... John

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 5/31/2020 9:04:00 PM

I love the painting and your romantic lines, John. I only wish my first was that good! Hugs, Rhonda

John Gondolf
Date: 6/1/2020 8:05:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your thoughts and comments, Rhonda, I appreciate it. Hugs, John

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/31/2020 5:30:00 PM

My first kiss was not that great. but the second one. WOWOWOWOW. Good one, John.

John Gondolf
Date: 6/1/2020 8:04:00 AM

They do seem to get better with time. Thanks for sharing your thoughts, Andrea. John

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/31/2020 6:48:00 AM

Isn't it sensational, still a teenager, him or her with a lifetime ahead. A truly wonderful poem. Blessings, my friend, Jennifer.

John Gondolf
Date: 6/3/2020 4:52:00 AM

Thank you, Jenn, I appreciate your thoughts and comments. Hugs, John

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 5/30/2020 8:08:00 AM

A prelude to deeper feelings ... Lovely tender poem. Thank you ...

John Gondolf
Date: 5/30/2020 8:17:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your thoughts and comments, Shirley. Such a kiss as I describe will always be a prelude to something deeper. Hugs, John

Greg Gaul

Date: 5/29/2020 8:54:00 AM

So, so sweet. Sad thing is we never get to do it again. Or do we?

John Gondolf
Date: 5/29/2020 1:57:00 PM

Thanks, Greg, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate your thoughts and comments. John

Brandy Nicole

Date: 5/28/2020 8:38:00 PM

Oh my!! Such a magical moment indeed. "lips touching lips" Yes, this is bliss. Your words create a beautiful mood. Romantic. Soft and sensual too. This painting matches your thoughts perfectly. :) Brandy

John Gondolf
Date: 5/28/2020 10:58:00 PM

Thank you for sharing your thoughts and comments, Brandy, the artist is a friend of mine and when I saw this painting I just had to place my words with it. All the best my sweet friend. Hugs, John

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/28/2020 5:56:00 PM

Just when I thought I'd read everything that could possibly be written about a kiss, you have come along and added a new dimension with this soulful poem, John. Kudos! :) gw

John Gondolf
Date: 5/28/2020 11:00:00 PM

Thanks, Gershon, my thoughts were inspired by this beautiful painting. Stay well. John

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/28/2020 1:46:00 PM

I think we all remember that first Kiss John, and probably cringe at the thought of it lol. Enjoyed your verse, hope your well. Tom

John Gondolf
Date: 5/28/2020 2:36:00 PM

Thanks, Tom, I can remember my first kiss as if it were yesterday, and that was many, many yesterdays ago. Stay safe. John