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Fire - of Ancient Origins

Fire – Of Ancient Origins Anthropological dawning’s Cave walls with lit magic drawings Of firestorms Sacred mystical deity Cavemen prayed with fidelity For firelights Their children delighted and grew History ignited the fuse On fireworks Created by: Earl Schumacker on 11/19/14 for - Fire, Earth, Wind, - Poetry Contest (Theme is – Fire)

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Faye Gibson

Date: 11/28/2014 11:46:00 AM

Wow! You came up with a great theme for this one. Congratulations.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/27/2014 5:45:00 PM

Cool, it is like the theme song for Big Bang theory. from caveman up to modern man!! Congrats for your win.

Earl Schumacker
Date: 11/28/2014 6:17:00 PM

Hi Andrea, Thank you so much for your encouragement. I'm glad you liked it. Big Bang is one of my favorite shows. Have a pleasant evening. Take care. Earl

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 11/26/2014 7:40:00 PM

I love your unique take on the theme! Congrats to you, Earl! Hugs, Rhonda

Earl Schumacker
Date: 11/26/2014 9:02:00 PM

Hi Rhonda, Thank you so much. Congratulations to you too. Your poem was one of the best I've read for this contest. I would have given you a 1. Have a great day and a Happy Thanksgiving. Earl

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/26/2014 7:52:00 AM

fine historical perspective on generational themes, earl...thanks for gracing my contest and big congrats on your great win!

Earl Schumacker
Date: 11/26/2014 11:35:00 AM

Hi Nette, Thank you so much for your kind words and encouragement. It was a lot of fun. Have a Happy Thanksgiving. Take care. Earl

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/26/2014 1:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this amazing entry Earl. I really liked yours!

Earl Schumacker
Date: 11/26/2014 11:43:00 AM

Hi Connie, Thank you so much. Congratulations to you too for your great poem and win. Have a Happy Thanksgiving. Take care. Earl

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 11/25/2014 6:34:00 PM

Nice to see a different take on this. Congratulations on your win Earl.

Earl Schumacker
Date: 11/25/2014 8:52:00 PM

Hi Brenda, Thank you. I appreciate your comments. Congratulations to you too. I enjoyed your interesting poem in this contest. Take care. Earl

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/25/2014 6:31:00 PM

Hi Earl, I really like the images you used for your fire theme...the dawn of civilization...what a long way we've come. Very moving. Congratulations to you for your win! Sandra

Earl Schumacker
Date: 11/25/2014 8:57:00 PM

Hi Sandra, Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Congratulations to you too. I enjoyed reading your excellent entry in this contest. Nice win. Nice job. Have a great evening. Earl

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/25/2014 4:17:00 PM

This is so good Earl, I love yours. Congratulations on your fine win.

Earl Schumacker
Date: 11/25/2014 5:28:00 PM

Hi Maurice, I appreciate your comments. Thanks. Take it easy. Earl

Jan Allison

Date: 11/25/2014 3:06:00 PM

Don't know how I missed commenting on this Earl - love the imagery - great write my friend - many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 11/25/2014 5:36:00 PM

Those lovely comments mean more to me than my actual placement thank you Earl:-) Hugs jan xx

Earl Schumacker
Date: 11/25/2014 5:32:00 PM

Hi Jan, They must have just posted this contest win. I'm glad you liked this one. I enjoyed your wonderful creation. Congratulations on your higher placement in the contest but you should have placed higher. Good job. Keep up the good work. Take care. Earl