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You say hello And give me a spark You touch my arm The fire starts You kiss me deep The furnace glows You tell me you love me The volcano blows We make love And that lava flows Our love’s like the sun I start to glow You've burned me down I'm nothing but ash Every time I see you You light the match
Author's Note: Another word poem with Judy Dunbar. Check out her version too please. This One had a 20 minute time limit, but Judy could write War and Peace in that time.

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Date: 4/16/2019 2:56:00 AM
Thank you for doing these challenges with me. You make poetry exactly what is should be; fun. This was a great one. You kept the thread running all through your version and you wrote a great poem. I'm trying hard to keep to the point and not write a comment as long as a chapter in War and Peace :)
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Date: 4/15/2019 6:54:00 PM
words stayed in the thematic of fire and all its intricacies, enjoyed, Elsa
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Date: 4/15/2019 7:56:00 PM
Yes, I'm glad you enjoyed.