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saffron sun flames sky melted gold joins blue riffles - sunset swims to shore Susan Ashley August 20, 2017 ~ Second Place ~ Contest: May Premier 7, Any 1, 2, or 3 Line Form, Any theme Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Date: 5/25/2019 8:50:00 AM
Beautiful imagery, Susan. Love your title. Congrats on your podium finish win.
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Date: 5/26/2019 7:40:00 PM
Thank you, Line. The kindness of your lovely comments and heartwarming congrats are so appreciated... My warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 5/25/2019 4:24:00 AM
Beautiful imagery, congratulations on your win in the contest!
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Date: 5/26/2019 7:40:00 PM
Thank you, Tania, for your lovely comment and for the delight of your kind congrats.. Warmest wishes. ~Susan
Date: 5/25/2019 3:40:00 AM
Exquisite Susan, so many congrats for your most beautiful Haiku and the last line - wow... With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 5/26/2019 7:39:00 PM
Ann, I am delighted by your wonderful comments and kind congrats. I'm so pleased you enjoyed my poem. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 5/24/2019 9:24:00 PM
I love the blue riffles...cool wording! Congrats!
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Date: 5/24/2019 9:35:00 PM
Thank you, Kim for your lovely comment and for the delight of your kind congrats.. Warmest wishes. ~Susan
Date: 5/24/2019 7:11:00 PM
wow, that last line is utterly fantastic. Congrats on your sweet win.
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Date: 5/24/2019 9:37:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. The kindness of your lovely comment and heartwarming congrats are so appreciated... My warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 4/8/2018 10:05:00 PM
Lovely
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Date: 4/9/2018 3:08:00 PM
Thank you Tim for your lovely comment and for the delight of your visit.. Warmest wishes. ~Susan
Date: 11/17/2017 2:56:00 PM
I love the imagery...and sunset swimming to shore, Susan. This was a though contest where there were many good entries. Regards // paul
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Date: 11/17/2017 10:32:00 PM
Yes Paul, it was a tough contest and the winning haiku was superb! Thank you very much for your appreciation of my haiku and for sharing your treasured thoughts with me. It's always a delight to have your presence grace my poetry page.. My warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 11/15/2017 2:08:00 AM
Such a beautiful poem, Susan. Breathtaking imagery captured so succinctly in the form. A travesty that this received an "N/A" - you should definitely enter it in another contest, when the opportunity arises! Kind regards, John.
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Date: 11/15/2017 7:26:00 PM
John, I so appreciate your sincere words of appreciation. I'm very happy that you thought so highly of my haiku :) Thank you for your uplifting comment and wonderful visit my friend.. ~Susan
Date: 11/9/2017 8:28:00 PM
I found it: Sunset Spills Over link: https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/sunset_spills_over_727625
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Date: 11/9/2017 10:16:00 PM
Andrea, I found it and it is gorgeous. I left you a comment :) Thank you for finding it!
Date: 11/9/2017 8:26:00 PM
Susan, I am having trouble locating a poem of yours I have not read but I noticed this is still your number one poem and that contest finally WAS judged. Yours was better than the one which won. I saw it and that is MY humble opinion. I can't remember the name of mine, but I will go look it up for you now.
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Date: 11/9/2017 10:22:00 PM
Andrea, thank you for your awesome comment and I appreciate your shared thoughts with me and your opinion expressed, but as I have to sometimes say.., c'est la vie... even if it didn't win the contest, I'm glad it won your heart, and that to me is even better :) Thank you my friend!
Date: 10/30/2017 5:24:00 PM
Lovely imagery, Susan. Really good job. Regards, John.
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Date: 10/30/2017 7:05:00 PM
Thank you John for your beautiful response to my poem. The kindness of your lovely visit and warmhearted words is so appreciated... My warmest regards always.. ~Susan
Date: 10/5/2017 6:49:00 AM
Such stunning imagery Susan I have a wonderful sunset picture my hubby took I really should write a poem about it especially as it silhouettes my final resting place!!:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/5/2017 4:26:00 PM
Hi Jan, thank you for your lovely sentiments and visit. I always appreciate your wonderful comments and I think you should definitely write a poem about your sunset pic and post the pic with it. I would love to read and see it someday! :) Susan
Date: 9/30/2017 7:33:00 PM
I see this one of yours I faved has become your number one best poem! I wonder if that Haiku contest will ever get judged!! My entry too was about sunset and I hope we BOTH might win. Yours is divine.
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Date: 9/30/2017 8:51:00 PM
Hi Andrea, thank you for your wonderful visit and kind words. That would be awesome if we both won and hopefully it gets judged sooner rather than later. Thank you for the compliment about my poem, much appreciated. What's the name of your haiku in the contest? I would love to read it... :)
Date: 9/17/2017 9:18:00 PM
Sunset swims to shore Your work warms me to my core. Big numbers say it all
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Date: 9/11/2017 5:43:00 PM
Beautifully conceived Haiku Susan. Stunning imagery! And a FAV ! g
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Date: 9/11/2017 7:03:00 PM
Hi George, thank you so much for your very kind words, your visit and the fav, I am honored. Much appreciation for your time to read my poems. I hope you have a wonderful evening George! :) Susan
Date: 9/10/2017 4:41:00 AM
This bright gem, my first poem read this fine morn has given light, tho' the darkness outside of my window , attempts to deny it.. So much beauty an thought in such few words. A fav...
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Date: 9/10/2017 12:40:00 PM
Hi Robert, I'm happy that my haiku brightened your morning! Thank you so very much for your kind and wonderful comment, the fav and for the smile I have reading your lovely words. Much appreciation for your visit and kindness :) Susan
Date: 9/3/2017 6:27:00 PM
What a beautiful picture you have painted with this lovely haiku! The imagery is totally awesome! Love it! Hugs. Pandita
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Date: 9/3/2017 6:42:00 PM
Hi Pandita, I always love it when you grace my page with your visit. Thank you for your really beautiful compliment. I so appreciate your lovely sentiments. Hugs to you too :) Susan
Date: 9/1/2017 6:35:00 PM
This haiku really says a lot. Beauty in only 3 lines.
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Date: 9/2/2017 12:01:00 PM
Hi Sunlite, thank you so much for your wonderful comment. I'm glad you enjoyed and I SO appreciate your visit:)
Date: 8/31/2017 2:09:00 PM
Such delightful insight and vision Sussan - well done
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Date: 8/31/2017 3:35:00 PM
Hi Michael, what a wonderful and sweet comment! I'm glad you enjoyed my hiaku and I so appreciate your visit. Many thank you's! :)
Date: 8/25/2017 5:57:00 PM
I came back and decided I want to fave this gem!
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Date: 8/25/2017 10:36:00 PM
Oh Andrea, that's very sweet! Thank you so much for the fave, I appreciate your kindness more than you could know! :)
Date: 8/25/2017 3:01:00 AM
Oh, I love this. My kind of imagery. That last line alone is worth repeated reads. So beautiful :)
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Date: 8/25/2017 10:34:00 PM
Hi Bernard, thank you very much for your kind and generous comment. It makes my day that you appreciated my Haiku and I so appreciate your time and your visit :)
Date: 8/24/2017 8:40:00 AM
Vivid scenery! Nice one!
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Date: 8/24/2017 9:08:00 PM
Thank you Susan :) I truly appreciate your visit and wonderful comment.
Date: 8/22/2017 1:35:00 PM
beautiful Haiku , I loved it :)
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Date: 8/23/2017 12:14:00 AM
Thank you hafssa Aj. I truly appreciate your kind comment and wonderful visit. :)
Date: 8/22/2017 7:38:00 AM
beautiful imagery..
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Date: 8/22/2017 8:37:00 AM
Thank you Si for your wonderful comment and visit :)
Date: 8/21/2017 11:17:00 PM
This Haiku show a very powerful image , Susan.. a fav.
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Date: 8/22/2017 8:39:00 AM
Eve, much appreciation for your beautiful comment and your visit and many thank you's for the fav! :)
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