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Finger Painting

Though my sister, cream- faced and restless, was born night - blind, Colors drip in her head ... painting moonlight that gazes within her fingers. Contest of Silent One: When One Line is Not Enough 6/2/2018

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Line Gauthier

Date: 6/9/2018 10:09:00 PM

Lovely, nette. Congrats on your top win.

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 6/5/2018 2:48:00 AM

Congratulations, Nette on your win.

Eve Roper

Date: 6/4/2018 10:59:00 PM

Great verse, Nette, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/4/2018 9:27:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with these refreshing two lines.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/4/2018 10:39:00 AM

So lovely, Nette! Congrats!

Joseph May

Date: 6/4/2018 9:01:00 AM

Congrats on your win Nette

Winged Warrior

Date: 6/4/2018 8:39:00 AM

Through love we see and through art we express...Congrats!!! on your win Nette...love & light...^WW^

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/4/2018 8:06:00 AM

- Hurray :) - Many congrats on your win, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Elaine George

Date: 6/4/2018 7:18:00 AM

A two line masterpiece,Nette... Many congrats on your win. Elaine

Silent One

Date: 6/4/2018 6:28:00 AM

Well expressed Nette.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Joseph May

Date: 6/3/2018 9:16:00 AM

Seeing beauty through the mind's eye... best wishes

Ashley Conte

Date: 6/3/2018 4:46:00 AM

"Painting moonlight that gazes within her fingers"-- excellent ending which conveys your visual artistry!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/2/2018 2:26:00 PM

- So sad to never enjoy the sight of the moonlight ... (or the stars) - Lovely written, Nette - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 6/2/2018 10:43:00 AM

The many ways we see... Best wishes Nette...

Gabby Sabre

Date: 6/2/2018 10:04:00 AM

With the loss of sight , the sense of hearing compensates for the former. Your startling contrast adds a layered dimension to this incredible verse! Undeniably a talent you are ar ease with!!