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my wings flutter but I cannot fly and I cannot breathe . . . for life is cruel- the sword sharp and true yet, that is exactly when I find my strength _____________________ November 7, 2021 Poetry/Free Verse/finding strength Copyright Protected, ID 11-1405-135-07 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Bite Size Poem, No 26 sponsor, Line Gauthier, HM, Judged 11/18/2021

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Date: 11/19/2021 3:48:00 PM
Lovely and courageous! Congrats!
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Date: 11/20/2021 11:59:00 AM
Karen, thanks for the compliment and congrats ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 11/19/2021 9:25:00 AM
Very beautiful, Constance. Life is definitely not fair. Many falter but you show strength. Congratulations.
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Date: 11/20/2021 12:00:00 PM
Ann, thank you for the compliment and the congratulations ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 11/19/2021 6:06:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Date: 11/19/2021 7:36:00 AM
Kim, thanks for the visit and congratulations ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 11/18/2021 10:32:00 PM
Indeed, we find strength in subtle unknown ways. Thank you for making me aware of the fact. And... Congratulations!
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Date: 11/19/2021 6:00:00 AM
Christuraj, thank you for the comment and the congratulations ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 11/18/2021 9:25:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Constance. Congrats !
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Date: 11/19/2021 6:01:00 AM
Line, thank you for the contest and for my Honorable Mention and for the compliment and congrats ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 11/10/2021 12:15:00 AM
I have mostly done this, although have always Been one who would share Constance, True to form I always end up being the one Instigating pushing encouraging..' It's just how It's meant to be i must now conclude, even Though I do have helpers? They won't seem to Commit as much so this speaks deeply to me! God bless your presence'
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Date: 11/10/2021 8:52:00 AM
Joe, thanks for the visit and great comment and compliment ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 11/7/2021 7:06:00 PM
Yes, indeed, Constance. We weep and draw our strength…our breath to go on.
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Date: 11/8/2021 8:46:00 AM
Kim, thanks for the visit and comment, yes, it is in hardships that we grow stronger ~ love and serenity _Constance