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Finding Peace

Kneeling as the curtains of time slipped to drift in the river of days, my eyes sighed tears and my heart cupped to capture its communion praying as the folds of hours enveloped and draped to pool, over hands in humilities hold, as each whisper travelled mere moments to awaken a Star unknowingly my words had filigreed to glimmer in milli seconds of wonder, and the Sapphire dome now shimmers to mirror a future enthralled at peace

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/26/2012 4:35:00 AM
found peace in your poem,thanks Jayne,lovely done
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Date: 7/25/2011 10:53:00 PM
jane, sorry I can't look far back in your poems. I promised hubbie I"d be off here an hour ago. so now I am gonna force myself to get off. Hope you put up a new poem soon! Luv, andrea
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Date: 7/25/2011 9:52:00 AM
So soft and gentle, beautiful visuals to entrance. Thank you for the visit and kind words.
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Date: 7/24/2011 2:44:00 PM
Very expressive and creative work..Enjoyrd reading the poetic thoughts penned..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 7/24/2011 10:47:00 AM
as each whisper travelled mere moments to awaken a Star I thought those lines were so beautiful!!
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Date: 7/24/2011 4:14:00 AM
a tranguil scene so engaging, jayne... superb! :) hugs, nette
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