Feud--1

Fiery hate-fueled war Fierce, continued conflict Frightful heart-breaking blight Ferocious, savage sight Forgoes chances to mend Forsakes pleas, “This much end!” Flouts God’s command to LOVE* *Mark 12:31 (King James Version): “Thou shalt love thy neighbor as thyself.”

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Kim Merryman

Date: 9/27/2016 2:21:00 PM

A powerful look at the consequences of a feud. It would be a much better world if everyone followed Mark12:31. Congrats on your win, Janice! Love, Kim

Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/27/2016 5:16:00 PM

Thank you so much, Kim. Thanks for sponsoring the contest. Janice

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/27/2016 3:54:00 AM

- Janice, congratulations on your great wins poems - I do not participate often in contest, but this I like very much - A challenge like a puzzle .... not easy ... but Pleiades poems is a wonderful form - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/27/2016 8:34:00 AM

Thank you so much, Anne-Lise! I enter a LOT of contests--and lose as often as I place! Janice

Jan Allison

Date: 9/26/2016 5:50:00 PM

many congrats Janice:-) hugs jan xx

Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/27/2016 8:38:00 AM

Thanks so much, Jan! Janice

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/25/2016 8:37:00 PM

oh you are early with the F contest!! I did not see it posted yet! You did a great job with this one, Janice. The lines really support the word Feud

Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/25/2016 9:13:00 PM

Thanks so much, Andrea. I'm glad you liked it. Janice

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/25/2016 7:36:00 AM

powerful write with an uplifting ending, janice... very finale done!..huggs

Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/25/2016 7:54:00 AM

Thanks so much, Nette! Janice