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FEELINGS OF LOVE

In the clear water of a summer stream Your face shone out bright and clear I wrote in the leaves and flowers About you who is like the soft sunlight Like a cloud in my horizon Like a rythm in my soul You stood like the bright flame of the mud lamp which burns in my heart Come swimming through the gentle breeze like a cloud and sprinkle your shower on me always You are my favourite dream who is like the peacock when it spreads out it feathers during the rain Memories are standing on my way like the trees on the wayside Girl who wears anklets and who is as beautiful as the moon I am the avenue trees which decorate your foot path Waves stretch out to the green banks For many births my heart has been searching for In a heaven which is covered by sun rays In a cage which is wrapped with leaves I am being awakened from my meditation because of a butterfly(you)

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Date: 9/18/2013 4:26:00 AM
Nice poem BABU,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,Please read my poems and comment...........
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Date: 9/2/2013 2:43:00 AM
- Excellent poem Yadhu.... Beautiful written, thanks for sharing.... - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/30/2013 3:08:00 AM
SWEET AND VERY BEAUTIFUL PIECE
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Date: 8/28/2013 7:15:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup Yadhu . Your poem is lovely, I enjoyed perusing it. Thanks for your kind review on mine.
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Date: 8/28/2013 12:51:00 PM
Yes! That sounds like love... Very nice write. Thanks for stopping by my page. I'll be looking forward to more great writings from you.
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Date: 8/28/2013 5:45:00 AM
An excellent start to life in the Soup! Well done!
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YADHU BABU
Date: 8/28/2013 10:02:00 PM
THANK YOU FOR YOUR VALUABLE REVIEW.....:)
Date: 8/28/2013 2:31:00 AM
kept up the good work
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YADHU BABU
Date: 8/28/2013 3:49:00 AM
thank you chris, obviously i'll
Date: 8/28/2013 12:27:00 AM
Romantically sweet! :) Thanks for your visits to my work.
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YADHU BABU
Date: 8/28/2013 10:16:00 PM
:)
Date: 8/27/2013 5:46:00 AM
This is a very influential write Yadhu, quite the special write! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this evening! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 8/27/2013 4:21:00 AM
Excellent piece written here my friend!!! This is love expressed here.
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Date: 8/27/2013 2:15:00 AM
- A very lovely poem, Yadhu ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/27/2013 2:08:00 AM
Nice poem YADHU... :) A~D
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