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Feel the Sway - Interpretive

Trifle the thoughts living on a breeze hearts darken twist a loving soul eased down an anchored way can't you feel the sway Oh mother, hear my calls muttered in a muted melody Pulse, held for dear thee thou leaving dotted lines, symbiotic airs of allusive elegance Imbed out an echo of relief nether real nor silenced hope exchanged, changed, or rearranged resistant to extinction slip away, go slip away

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/19/2017 10:29:00 PM
Tim, alright, I read it several times, but being mostly in the dark, I will refrain from bending your ears with some far-fetched interpretation. I hope you are going to enlighten us though:) Amitiés
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Date: 4/19/2017 8:02:00 PM
That was such an intellectual volley, I am sure its flying right over their heads!!
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Date: 4/19/2017 4:31:00 PM
Well this one is sure different from your norm Tim. It really causes the reader to go back and read it again. Couldn't understand it then either. ;) Food for thought none the less. God Bless and thanks so much for your kind words on my "The Meaning of Easter". JB
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Date: 4/19/2017 3:26:00 PM
Made me smile Tim... the forth stanza reminded me of the ultimate dot 13 form lol and I have no poetic airs and graces I mean I just write poop lol:-) hugs Jan xx 7
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Date: 4/19/2017 3:04:00 PM
I enjoyed reading you this evening Tim.
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Tim Smith
Date: 4/19/2017 3:09:00 PM
Thank you very much Charmaine
Date: 4/19/2017 3:00:00 PM
Reminiscent of Dada poetry, fun and the comment section fun on top ;) xomo
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Tim Smith
Date: 4/19/2017 3:08:00 PM
Thanks Maureen...haha wish I was that good
Date: 4/19/2017 2:25:00 PM
My $2 is in the mail but sadly it is not resistant to extinction. Dang. That is such a cool line...it swayed me.
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Tim Smith
Date: 4/19/2017 2:32:00 PM
lol...hope it is worth more than the paper it is written on...Thanks Chris...that's enough for 4 kid cones at McDonalds
Date: 4/19/2017 2:05:00 PM
haha Tim.. love the "airs of allusive elegance." Slip away sounds like the best choice. I'm not easily swayed...;-)
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Tim Smith
Date: 4/19/2017 2:08:00 PM
Me neither...thanks Lin
Date: 4/19/2017 12:43:00 PM
I'm feeling it now, Tim! Or was that you just casting a spell over your readers? I love your style mate!
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Tim Smith
Date: 4/19/2017 12:48:00 PM
That is a great idea...They could all send me $2...lol
Date: 4/19/2017 12:39:00 PM
Haha, I don't know what it is about, but oh boy does this swing, I love it :D
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/19/2017 8:05:00 PM
Darren you have no idea how many times I had to go " dont what its about" LOL
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Darren White
Date: 4/19/2017 2:44:00 PM
Haha Lin, thanks :D
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/19/2017 2:06:00 PM
Darren, I love your comment. You admit to not knowing what it's about and yet you give a great comment...You're unique. ;-)
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Tim Smith
Date: 4/19/2017 12:47:00 PM
Thank you my friend:)

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