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Over mossy cliffs of cascading falls,
          emerald embraces the rippled tides-
       Where mother nature takes a breath and calls
to the tiny toad that runs swift and hides.
    Branches resting along the pebbled shore...
               for it’s a perfect scene that I adore. 
  Riverbed flows as the streaming divides,
           living next to a forest to explore.

                   The sound of balance trickles in my mind,
                             the serenity bestowed starts to shine-
            For the falls and reverie have aligned;
                           splendor is created from the divine.





September 17, 2019
Eve Roper
Picturesque Rhyme Poetry Contest

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Date: 9/26/2019 4:59:00 PM
Lu congratulations on your win in the contest with this terrific write!
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Date: 9/26/2019 2:31:00 PM
Great poetry Eve...I especially love the first 4 lines. Congrats on a top win with this beauty.
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Date: 9/26/2019 7:58:00 AM
- Congratulations on your beautiful winning poem, L.L. :) - A truly amazing picture Eve chose :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/26/2019 12:04:00 AM
Divine indeed Luloo! This is amazingly beautiful. Congratulations on your deserving First Placement! : ) xxoo
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/26/2019 6:46:00 AM
many thanks sweet Connie :)-luloo
Date: 9/25/2019 10:56:00 PM
Love your imagery and the emotions, Laura, just beautiful. Congratulations on your win... Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/26/2019 6:46:00 AM
thank you sweet Eve, I am honored and LOVED that picture :) -luloo
Date: 9/18/2019 6:44:00 PM
Remember in the movie where Rene Zillwigger says "you had me at hello?" You had me at "Over mossy cliffs of cascading falls, emerald embraces the rippled tides-"
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Date: 9/20/2019 7:17:00 AM
yes I loved that movie with Tom Cruise! It was one of Nick and my favorite movies when we were younger. Thank you for the nice compliment caring Caren :)-luloo
Date: 9/17/2019 11:27:00 AM
such beauty expressed through your pen my friend...i loved the journey you took my imagination on...wonderful write! :) hugs
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/20/2019 7:15:00 AM
thank you very much sweet Sandra :)-luloo
Date: 9/17/2019 11:08:00 AM
Laura fascinating! Beautifully written my friend!;)
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/20/2019 7:15:00 AM
thank you sweet lady :)-luloo
Date: 9/17/2019 9:54:00 AM
Wow... This is a beautiful poem. I wish you all the best for the contest :) Blessings
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/20/2019 7:15:00 AM
thank you for all your wonderful compliments and comments, :)-luloo