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Farewell My Love

Sad Goodbyes Makes me cry Without you here I miss you so much An empty house of stone A lonely bed of silence My life will never be the same Only memories of you remain Blessed be the day we are in Heaven

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Gary Bateman

Date: 2/4/2018 1:01:00 PM

Hello Arturo, Sorry I missed this one earlier. Congrats on the POTD honor!! Very-Well Done my friend!! Your final verse says it all!! (I've used this Etheree format once in one of earlier poems. I might do another one in the future, but it depends, of course, on the theme I'm writing about.) Best Wishes, Gary

Arturo Michael
Date: 2/6/2018 9:35:00 PM

I tried it...but it's too restrictive for me...I feel I'm making it up...I guess because I'm normally inspired...Then I write... Although I'm doing my best to learn different form of poetry...Thank you Gary

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 2/4/2018 3:43:00 AM

Passionate and heartfelt. I like your poem. Dread when that time comes, if it comes and wait for more of your poetry. Wishes, Kai

Arturo Michael
Date: 2/6/2018 9:31:00 PM

Hi Kai...So Good to hear from you...All the best my friend...We all will come to an end

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 2/3/2018 9:18:00 AM

WoW! Such emotion expressed in this beautiful Etheree, Arturo. Kudos on POTD, well deserved, my dear friend. Love and hugs always.

Arturo Michael
Date: 2/3/2018 12:47:00 PM

Thank you Freddie...Good to hear from you...All the best

Melissa Tracy

Date: 2/3/2018 12:10:00 AM

Sadness expressed beautifully and what a sweet reunion it will be at those pearly gates! Congrats & best wishes!

Arturo Michael
Date: 2/3/2018 12:46:00 PM

What a happy day that will be...All the best Melissa

Silent One

Date: 2/1/2018 5:11:00 PM

Congrats on potd..

Arturo Michael
Date: 2/3/2018 12:45:00 PM

Thank you SO

Mick Talbot

Date: 2/1/2018 2:32:00 PM

Love the poem, gonna try your format, regards Mick

Tracyann Brear

Date: 2/1/2018 5:23:00 AM

Beautiful words.. thanks for sharing this

Arturo Michael
Date: 2/1/2018 5:38:00 AM

Good morning Tracyann...Wonderful to hear from you...All the best my friend...Have a nice day

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/1/2018 4:37:00 AM

- Congratulations on your awesome p.o.t.d., Gregory - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arturo Michael
Date: 2/1/2018 5:37:00 AM

Lovely Sunshine...A joy to hear from you...Have a nice day Anne-Lise

Judith S

Date: 2/1/2018 4:17:00 AM

How very touching Arturo!!! I can feel the pain in your heart. Many can relate to this intense sadness from loss. You've mastered the form!! Congratulations (belated) on POTD. ~ Judy

Arturo Michael
Date: 2/1/2018 5:35:00 AM

Good morning Judith...lovely compliment...All the best you...

Denis Brezik

Date: 2/1/2018 2:39:00 AM

It is so refreshing to see such a command of the language commander nice read . Its so Moby the language of the sea the sailing words .

Arturo Michael
Date: 2/1/2018 5:34:00 AM

It's what I know...the sand sea and the sun...Thanks for passing by Denis...All the best my friend

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/31/2018 8:42:00 PM

Oh Arturo, my dear friend, such a sadly beautiful poem with poignant imagery of loss and emptiness and hope.. Congratulations my friend on your well deserved POTD honors - Hooray!! Warmest wishes mon ami.. ~Susan

Arturo Michael
Date: 1/31/2018 9:01:00 PM

Thank you, Susan...I plan to flow until I meander my way to the sea...going to try different things and see what poems come naturally... Your support required...A hooray or a smile would say a lot... A big warm hug to you

James Swartz

Date: 1/31/2018 7:28:00 PM

Sad goodbyes are the hardest especially when they are done daily. A great poem about a sad goodbye.

Arturo Michael
Date: 1/31/2018 8:56:00 PM

Thanks James.., Very much appreciated...All the best to you my friend

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/31/2018 1:37:00 PM

- "Sad goodbyes make me cry" too, Arturo - A lovely poem :) - Congratulations on yours p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arturo Michael
Date: 1/31/2018 1:47:00 PM

It's hard to control those tears...they build up and flow...Thank you for passing by Anna-Lise...All the best

Ronald A. Williams

Date: 1/31/2018 1:31:00 PM

Nice lamentation and dedication.

Arturo Michael
Date: 1/31/2018 1:44:00 PM

Thank you, Ronald...All the best to you

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/31/2018 12:40:00 PM

I am back to congratulate you on having this fine poem honored with POTD! : )

Arturo Michael
Date: 1/31/2018 1:43:00 PM

Thank you Connie...Much appreciated...

Donna Loughman

Date: 1/31/2018 12:05:00 PM

Back to say congratulations! Well done!

Arturo Michael
Date: 1/31/2018 1:42:00 PM

So sweet...Thank you Donna

Charlie Smith

Date: 1/31/2018 11:29:00 AM

Great use of form Arturo, congratulations for POTD honors...

Arturo Michael
Date: 1/31/2018 1:52:00 PM

Thank you, Charlie...exploring to find my own form...It's Etheree's formula...a lesson indeed...All the best my friend

Eve Roper

Date: 1/31/2018 10:12:00 AM

Nicely done, Arturo, congratulations on POTD :)

Arturo Michael
Date: 1/31/2018 1:42:00 PM

Thank you Eve...All the best to you...

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton

Date: 1/31/2018 9:11:00 AM

Felicitaciones! I hate cold rooms and lonely beds... honourable poem Arturo. Lux Vitae. LLB

Arturo Michael
Date: 1/31/2018 9:16:00 AM

Gracias amiga...Always nice to hear from you...Have a nice day...I've got a free one and an idea for a Valentine poem...going to write my first one...All the best

Roy Pett

Date: 1/31/2018 8:39:00 AM

Congratulations on POTD with your well written Etheree Arturo. :)

Arturo Michael
Date: 1/31/2018 9:18:00 AM

Yes, my first Etheree... the creator of this style...I give her the glory of the day... I just inserted my mix into her formula...All the best to you my friend