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Thank you Etheree. And thank you Silent One for recommending the style...It's special...

                                   
                                                       Sad                      
                                                   Goodbyes
                                                 Makes me cry
                                          
                                              Without you here 
                                             I miss you so much 
                                   
                                          An empty room so cold 
                                           A lonely bed of silence 

                                       My life will never be the same 
                                       Only memories of you remain 

                               One bright day I’ll be with you in Heaven 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/4/2018 1:01:00 PM
Hello Arturo, Sorry I missed this one earlier. Congrats on the POTD honor!! Very-Well Done my friend!! Your final verse says it all!! (I've used this Etheree format once in one of earlier poems. I might do another one in the future, but it depends, of course, on the theme I'm writing about.) Best Wishes, Gary
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Date: 2/6/2018 9:35:00 PM
I tried it...but it's too restrictive for me...I feel I'm making it up...I guess because I'm normally inspired...Then I write... Although I'm doing my best to learn different form of poetry...Thank you Gary
Date: 2/4/2018 3:43:00 AM
Passionate and heartfelt. I like your poem. Dread when that time comes, if it comes and wait for more of your poetry. Wishes, Kai
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Date: 2/6/2018 9:31:00 PM
Hi Kai...So Good to hear from you...All the best my friend...We all will come to an end
Date: 2/3/2018 9:18:00 AM
WoW! Such emotion expressed in this beautiful Etheree, Arturo. Kudos on POTD, well deserved, my dear friend. Love and hugs always.
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Date: 2/3/2018 12:47:00 PM
Thank you Freddie...Good to hear from you...All the best
Date: 2/3/2018 12:10:00 AM
Sadness expressed beautifully and what a sweet reunion it will be at those pearly gates! Congrats & best wishes!
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Date: 2/3/2018 12:46:00 PM
What a happy day that will be...All the best Melissa
Date: 2/1/2018 5:11:00 PM
Congrats on potd..
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Date: 2/3/2018 12:45:00 PM
Thank you SO
Date: 2/1/2018 2:32:00 PM
Love the poem, gonna try your format, regards Mick
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Date: 2/1/2018 5:23:00 AM
Beautiful words.. thanks for sharing this
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Date: 2/1/2018 5:38:00 AM
Good morning Tracyann...Wonderful to hear from you...All the best my friend...Have a nice day
Date: 2/1/2018 4:37:00 AM
- Congratulations on your awesome p.o.t.d., Gregory - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/1/2018 5:37:00 AM
Lovely Sunshine...A joy to hear from you...Have a nice day Anne-Lise
Date: 2/1/2018 4:17:00 AM
How very touching Arturo!!! I can feel the pain in your heart. Many can relate to this intense sadness from loss. You've mastered the form!! Congratulations (belated) on POTD. ~ Judy
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Date: 2/1/2018 5:35:00 AM
Good morning Judith...lovely compliment...All the best you...
Date: 2/1/2018 2:39:00 AM
It is so refreshing to see such a command of the language commander nice read . Its so Moby the language of the sea the sailing words .
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Date: 2/1/2018 5:34:00 AM
It's what I know...the sand sea and the sun...Thanks for passing by Denis...All the best my friend
Date: 1/31/2018 8:42:00 PM
Oh Arturo, my dear friend, such a sadly beautiful poem with poignant imagery of loss and emptiness and hope.. Congratulations my friend on your well deserved POTD honors - Hooray!! Warmest wishes mon ami.. ~Susan
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Date: 1/31/2018 9:01:00 PM
Thank you, Susan...I plan to flow until I meander my way to the sea...going to try different things and see what poems come naturally... Your support required...A hooray or a smile would say a lot... A big warm hug to you
Date: 1/31/2018 7:28:00 PM
Sad goodbyes are the hardest especially when they are done daily. A great poem about a sad goodbye.
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Date: 1/31/2018 8:56:00 PM
Thanks James.., Very much appreciated...All the best to you my friend
Date: 1/31/2018 1:37:00 PM
- "Sad goodbyes make me cry" too, Arturo - A lovely poem :) - Congratulations on yours p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/31/2018 1:47:00 PM
It's hard to control those tears...they build up and flow...Thank you for passing by Anna-Lise...All the best
Date: 1/31/2018 1:31:00 PM
Nice lamentation and dedication.
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Date: 1/31/2018 1:44:00 PM
Thank you, Ronald...All the best to you
Date: 1/31/2018 12:40:00 PM
I am back to congratulate you on having this fine poem honored with POTD! : )
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Date: 1/31/2018 1:43:00 PM
Thank you Connie...Much appreciated...
Date: 1/31/2018 12:05:00 PM
Back to say congratulations! Well done!
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Date: 1/31/2018 1:42:00 PM
So sweet...Thank you Donna
Date: 1/31/2018 11:29:00 AM
Great use of form Arturo, congratulations for POTD honors...
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Date: 1/31/2018 1:52:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie...exploring to find my own form...It's Etheree's formula...a lesson indeed...All the best my friend
Date: 1/31/2018 10:12:00 AM
Nicely done, Arturo, congratulations on POTD :)
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Date: 1/31/2018 1:42:00 PM
Thank you Eve...All the best to you...
Date: 1/31/2018 9:11:00 AM
Felicitaciones! I hate cold rooms and lonely beds... honourable poem Arturo. Lux Vitae. LLB
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Date: 1/31/2018 9:16:00 AM
Gracias amiga...Always nice to hear from you...Have a nice day...I've got a free one and an idea for a Valentine poem...going to write my first one...All the best
Date: 1/31/2018 8:39:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD with your well written Etheree Arturo. :)
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Date: 1/31/2018 9:18:00 AM
Yes, my first Etheree... the creator of this style...I give her the glory of the day... I just inserted my mix into her formula...All the best to you my friend
Date: 1/31/2018 8:07:00 AM
Congrats!!! my friend on POTD...you can write them all lol...a heavenly poem Arturo...stay in the light...^WW^
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Date: 1/31/2018 8:19:00 AM
I can't tell you how happy I am to hear from you...I haven't been seeing you for the new year... I hope all is well...Best of the best to my friend
Date: 1/31/2018 7:54:00 AM
Congratulations on potd Arturo! xomo :)
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Date: 1/31/2018 8:22:00 AM
Thank you Maureen...Have a lovely day
Date: 1/31/2018 7:21:00 AM
Great job and congrats
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Date: 1/31/2018 8:21:00 AM
Thank you Stephanie...I put my heart and soul into everything I do...All the best to you my friend
Date: 1/31/2018 7:00:00 AM
Congrats on POTD, Arturo.
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Date: 1/31/2018 8:19:00 AM
Hi Agnes, good to see you...All the best my friend
Date: 1/31/2018 5:47:00 AM
Returning with congrats on POTD, Arturo..well done, friend.
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Date: 1/31/2018 9:21:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay... All the credit goes to Etheree for her style...I just put in the ingredients...Have a nice day my friend
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