Farewell

My dabble in limericks is finally done I'm sorry to say that this is the last one The master is back His name is sir Jack So kick off your shoes we're about to have fun

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Joseph May

Date: 5/20/2015 12:24:00 PM

Perhaps it should be Sir John and Sir Jack... nice limerick Tim

John Williams

Date: 5/18/2015 8:36:00 PM

A brilliant Limerick Tim. Fantastic flow and a great welcome back for Jack.------John

Tim Smith
Date: 5/18/2015 8:41:00 PM

Thanks John

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/18/2015 7:53:00 PM

You are required to give 4 weeks notice before resigning your post! Great Write!

Tim Smith
Date: 5/18/2015 8:11:00 PM

Lol

Peter Dome

Date: 5/18/2015 10:36:00 AM

Yeah. love it!, well done. enjoyed it Pete, seems we're in for a treat,

Skat A

Date: 5/18/2015 12:49:00 AM

Tim, good one... I enjoyed the poem, thanks for sharing. Luv SKAT

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 5/17/2015 7:18:00 PM

Hey Tim... you're not bad at these limericks. I'm sure you can sneak a few in behind young Jack's back. He needs to be kept on his toes - catch you soon Tim - Lindsay

Paul Callus

Date: 5/17/2015 4:23:00 PM

Excellent limerick, Tim! But it's not right that now Jack is back you give yourself the sack!! // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/17/2015 2:50:00 PM

- I do not know if I've read them all ..... but the ones I've read is superb, Tim - Keep going your Limerick !!!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/17/2015 10:41:00 AM

awww, you don't have to quit, tim. I like yours too!!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/17/2015 9:11:00 AM

Tim , you did your job stunningly : )..Lovely limerick,Hope you keep writing more : )

Tim Smith
Date: 5/17/2015 9:44:00 AM

Thanks sweet one....if the muses strike me I might.... They do miss writing about love.....hugs Tim

Jan Allison

Date: 5/17/2015 9:07:00 AM

You did a sterling job at keeping the humour flowing Tim:-) Hugs jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 5/17/2015 9:44:00 AM

nothing to stop you continuing Tim!:-) We need more humour on the site not less! hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith
Date: 5/17/2015 9:42:00 AM

Thanks Jan....it was fun