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fancy-underpants Premiere Contest Winner

or a poet of fancy footwork
"beware the moon, a bus prank." --a mischievous puck to pucker up for and kiss
* * * A moonbeam of a misty eye conversing with a rose aroused a dewdrop cute whose sigh should airily a fairy fly to rise at once in Passion's throes sans any underclothes-- A sight espied within a ring encharmèd by a puck who in a post chaise swift should wing to fetch the jealous fairy king, a playboy by the moon moonstruck whose fruit he longed to pluck-- so buzzes he a highbred bee a bare bead to lampoon to strip a drip of its Esprit-- since fairies fools like mortals be whose heads in Cupid's lap all swoon as Eros Greek all spoon-- when swift of foot and first in rhyme, a poet sans compare mere eons till his peak and prime of but a modesty sublime toot sweet the naked nip should bear his "Hot-Bard Underwear"! * * * a dedication of Respect for poor Fancy ever the secondhand rose of Imagination rich a helios rima villanueva española june, 2022--afoot abroad, the Bard e'er bare . . . "dewdrops" poetry contest sponsor angel l. villanueva 6/21/2022

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Date: 6/29/2022 10:30:00 PM
A very interesting poem with a unique imagination. Suspenseful. Apt imagery. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/29/2022 9:27:00 PM
Dear James, your fanciful poem is exquisite enchantment! I adore the internal and end rhymes (fantastic!) and admire the beautiful pulse of your poem. Most of all, I love your whimsical imagery, this playful creation of fancy is just as inspiring, inspiriting and exciting as that of imagination! A fav! Congratulations for your excellent trophy win in Angel's Contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/29/2022 12:48:00 PM
Very amusing James, will have to look out for some “Hot-Bard Underwear” for the old man to wear. Congratulations on your top spot in the contest… Belle
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Date: 6/29/2022 11:03:00 AM
"his Hot Bard Underwear" HaHa. Good one! Your poem has great rhythm. Congratulations on first place!
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Date: 6/29/2022 10:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your podium win James. A "naked" delight. All the best.
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Date: 6/29/2022 9:42:00 AM
Yay! Congratulations! James this is brilliant, very different, as are a lot of your poems. :) Angie
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Date: 6/29/2022 8:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a "Creative" write. Have a great/blessed day writing away.......................
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Date: 6/29/2022 7:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place win, James. You made excellent use of several metrical patterns, varying your stressed and unstressed syllables while maintaining a lovely meter throughout the poem. I much enjoyed reading this excellent piece!
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Date: 6/21/2022 11:18:00 AM
This is excellent
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