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Falling Up!!!

Soul ascending freeing weightless thoughts lifted shoulders eyes to nowhere searching plunging its way to abandonment..... sounds whisper light sight unrestored cautious heart.... Flaming bird sweeping.....

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Date: 11/21/2010 7:15:00 AM
Yes! Talent here. Great imagery! Blessings, Joy (Jew)
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Date: 3/13/2009 8:08:00 AM
Karena, wonderful images of a soul cllimbing to heaven. And the "flaming bird (perhaps a phoenix rising from the ashes) sweeping" up as well. Clever title, too. Sparked my interest! Love, Carolyn
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