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Falling Through Your Waterfall

Watching a waterfall is so stunning it holds you within its grasp it paints in you many a picture so fruitful from a mango to a rasp Imagine sailing down one wide river feels so deep and incredibly high then all of a sudden waterfall appears one's mind freezes thinks going to cry Waterfalls describe much of life anticipating many possible ordeals many times we can stand or fall how we end up is in the seal Falling into and through the stream swim to overcome that haunting breath be sure to take a breath one at a time making sure your actions escape death The force of the waterfall tests you many a time you think its all too much but strength comes to see you through so glad receiving that vital touch

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Date: 2/14/2021 2:29:00 AM
Wonderful write... yes, there are many tests throughout life... struggles, darkness and sorrow... but there is also love, light and laughter... Joy so wonderous. God bless you always with love and prayers, Gina
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 2/14/2021 2:59:00 PM
Thanks Gina, Glad you enjoyed it and thought it a wonderful piece, trust you're having a lovely day, God bless you, Gordon
Date: 2/13/2021 8:49:00 PM
Moments in life are like a Waterfall. An overflowing of emotions, the excitement of it all. "Strength comes to see you through" I completely agree. Many wonderful blessings to you. ~ Brandy
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 2/14/2021 1:05:00 AM
Thanks, Brandy, Glad you liked this one and agreed with my sentiments. Hope you're having lovely valentines day, blessings, Gordon

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