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Falling In Love Again

In paradise where love first met Embraced under beautiful sunset, Horizon's arc bending its shine As the full moon built our shrine. On river where memories float Softer tides keep them afloat As we celebrate our reunion In love and sacred communion. When feelings ignite our spark A distant star glows in the dark, Happiness waves its magic wand Hearts yearn to renew the bond. Fly me on the wings of eternity Engulf me with gentle gravity Let me feel you deep in my soul Take me on a splendor stroll. I am the song of your dream You are my lyrical music stream, As symphony of rhythm greets My heart misses a heartbeat. September 12, 2017 Placed 4th:Best Rhyming Poem Contest, by John Hamilton

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Valsa George

Date: 4/2/2023 6:10:00 AM

A beautiful love song flowing like a gentle rill, marked with simplicity of words and made powerful with the genuineness of feeling and lyrical exuberance with admirable rhythm and subjectivity.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/2/2017 9:18:00 AM

Another romantic gem, Vijay. Your pen got that loving touch. Gorgeous word-shaped emotions. Excellent poem. Going in the fave file for sure. Love and joy always.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/2/2017 10:03:00 AM

Thank you Freddie!

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/2/2017 5:15:00 PM

Congratulations Vijay on your win with this beautiful and romantic write. Wonderful rhyme too! :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/2/2017 5:38:00 PM

Thank you Susan!

Constance La France

Date: 10/2/2017 3:14:00 PM

Vijay, CONGRATULATIONS !

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/2/2017 5:38:00 PM

Thank you BW!

Joseph May

Date: 10/2/2017 1:33:00 PM

Beautiful write Vijay....Congrats on your win

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/2/2017 2:15:00 PM

Thanks Joseph!

John Hamilton

Date: 10/1/2017 9:45:00 PM

Hey Vijay really nice rhymes, congrats on a great poem, and a nice placement!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/2/2017 5:59:00 AM

Thanks John!

Curtis Johnson

Date: 9/13/2017 2:27:00 PM

Thank you, Vijay. I also think that you will place high in the 'Love again' contest.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/13/2017 2:34:00 PM

Thank you curtis for your lovely comments!

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 9/13/2017 11:47:00 AM

So much enthusiasm "Enticing me to fall in love again! Tickled that you are a new Lifetime Member, too, to the benefit of PS.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/13/2017 1:09:00 PM

Thank you SW for your lovely comments--delighted by your visit!

John Leong

Date: 9/13/2017 9:54:00 AM

nice! i liked that i felt immense romantic emotions as i flowed through your words. surely a rose is enough to win your love! good write! cheers!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/13/2017 1:07:00 PM

Lovely comments John--thanks for your visit!

Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 9/13/2017 8:06:00 AM

Lovely Quatrain with admirable rhythm and rhymes and rich content . Congratulation. Best regards and wishes.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/13/2017 9:02:00 AM

Thank you for your lovely comments Ovidiu!

Eve Roper

Date: 9/12/2017 8:07:00 PM

Vijay, Love the romantic poem... the imagery is great, luck in the contest a winner already...Thank you for reading my poem, "Suicide Prevention Anguish Isn't Always Visible" Hugs Eve ~`*

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/12/2017 8:34:00 PM

Thank you Eve..loved reading your feedback!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/12/2017 5:31:00 PM

So beautiful. Vijay. I bet this one fills up quickly, so I need to get on the ball!!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/12/2017 6:03:00 PM

Lovely comment Andrea! Looking forward to reading your lovely creation!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/12/2017 2:37:00 PM

- An intoxicating feeling, Vijay - Beautifully written - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/12/2017 3:30:00 PM

Such lovely comments from you Anne-Lise--many thanks!

Charlie Smith

Date: 9/12/2017 12:10:00 PM

Lovely thoughts Vijay, thanks for sharing them...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/12/2017 1:08:00 PM

Thank you Charlie--love your feedback!

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/12/2017 7:41:00 AM

This is beautiful Vijay! So well written. I love the line, flutter your bee wings. Very nice :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/12/2017 8:25:00 AM

Delighted by your feedback--your lovely comments always a pleasure, Heidi!

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/12/2017 6:34:00 AM

This is so beautiful, a gorgeous write my friend! I love the tenderness and heartfelt emotions that flow throughout your incredible poem! I surely enjoyed reading this remarkable piece this morning! What a fabulous poem, a magnificent piece, Great Work!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/12/2017 7:10:00 AM

Thank you Russell for your lovely comments!