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Falling

Of all the things I worry about Of all the things Im unsure about Loving you is not one of them You make me love you Is this some kind of voodoo Im falling for you So fast I cant catch myself Im falling so fast Too fast to worry about Falling too hard About getting hurt But I don’t want to slow down I want to fall I like to fall As long as I land In your arms With your lips on mine And your hand in my hand As long as your with me Im ok So I give you my heart My love Myself My whole being Just don’t hurt me Don’t brake me Because I don’t know How well I heal

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/30/2009 9:00:00 PM
Your short phrasing is very effective... you describe the fragility of a relationship so well. BRAVO Livyyy! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 1/23/2009 4:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your beautiful poetry being featured this week..God Bless*Tyesha
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Date: 1/22/2009 7:20:00 PM
Congrats on "Falling" being featured, Livana. Vince
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Date: 1/22/2009 9:39:00 AM
Livana - I just wanted to say congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 1/21/2009 1:09:00 PM
thanks everyone im so excited and surprised that it was featured ididnt realy think i was that good of a writer...Livyyy
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Date: 1/19/2009 3:43:00 PM
This reads desperately FAST! I like it though. You have an original touch. Congrats on this selection. Love, daver
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Date: 1/19/2009 11:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Livana. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/19/2009 9:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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