Fallen Leaves

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autumn leaves as sands of time they fall each memory lingers in the breeze touched by the kiss of late afternoon sun the path ahead paved with moments spent and treasured underfoot honored a life recycled at peace nurtures new memories AP: Honorable Mention 2021 Posted on October 13, 2021

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/17/2021 7:56:00 AM

Yes absolutely love your second stanza and your line in the 3rd stanza 'a life recycled' thought provoking write dear Line, Thoughts and blessings, Jennifer.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/17/2021 9:44:00 AM

Thank you very much, Jennifer ~ most appreciated

Debra L Brown

Date: 10/13/2021 4:32:00 PM

I loved your poem. "Each memory lingers in the breeze". Lovely. Best wishes - Debbie

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/13/2021 5:34:00 PM

Thank you very much, Debra. Much appreciated ~