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Fallen In Love

Your stare stabbing so shear sharp - An acute arrow, hook-tipped - As in the throat, bone of carp, Pricking the flesh; gets it clipped... Yet my yearning, like bee-hop To draw nectar from you dripped; And touch the peak of glee-top, Like wide wildfire gets me gripped. It's hence, dear, I run to you, As a beggar seeks the rich; My bowl of soul filled with woe, Begging love's eternal niche... To you to prove my love true, My life with your love enrich; with mercy glances as dew, Thrill me and wholly bewitch. 13 August 2021

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Date: 8/13/2021 2:04:00 PM
This second stanza is particularly powerful and flowing. Congratulations on your placement.
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Date: 8/13/2021 9:27:00 AM
Congratulations, Christuraj. Lovely poem. Very expressive.
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Date: 8/13/2021 8:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely story/write about love. Love is a great thing. A wonderful rhyme. Have a blessed day writing away..................
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Date: 8/13/2021 4:36:00 AM
Your emotions are beautifully captured in this write. Congratulations! Rhymes superb as usual
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Date: 8/13/2021 3:38:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. It is very descriptive and expressive. Thanks for dropping by my page with congrats. Sara
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Date: 8/13/2021 2:30:00 AM
hungry love write, good poem, congratulations on your win !
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Date: 7/9/2021 7:28:00 AM
I'm all about the rhyme so naturally I loved this one as well.
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Date: 7/1/2021 10:54:00 PM
Wonderful rhyming, Christuraj:)
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Date: 7/1/2021 11:16:00 PM
Yes, I tried the rhyming. Thank you very much.

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