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Fall Slumber

Trees proudly display their gems Until winds drop their bounty Leaving barren trees and nests Slumber until Spring 10/1/2020 Contest: Writing Challenge - Dodoitsu Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 10/12/2020 11:08:00 AM
congrats to you. This is a beauty. Can't wait to see all the other entries!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/13/2020 2:55:00 AM
Thank you Andrea
Date: 10/9/2020 8:06:00 AM
Congrats on your win! You rocked this one Tania!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/10/2020 5:45:00 AM
Thank you Mark!
Date: 10/6/2020 3:19:00 PM
Dropping back to say many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/7/2020 2:51:00 AM
Thank you Jan! hugs
Date: 10/5/2020 7:38:00 AM
Tania, congratulations on your win in my Dodoitsu Writing Challenge with this wonderful poem _Constance
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/5/2020 2:23:00 PM
Thank you Constance!
Date: 10/4/2020 1:22:00 PM
I now know why it's called 'fall' in the US, leaves are blowing round merrily at the moment, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/4/2020 1:24:00 PM
Thank you Jan! hugs xx
Date: 10/4/2020 1:11:00 PM
Aww, the nests. Nicely done Tania! Congratulations! Linda
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/4/2020 1:24:00 PM
Thank you Linda!
Date: 10/4/2020 12:07:00 PM
I really enjoyed your poem, congratulations on your win. :-)
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/4/2020 1:25:00 PM
Thank you Joanna!
Date: 10/4/2020 11:45:00 AM
- Congratulations on your beautiful poem, Tania :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/4/2020 1:25:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise! hugs
Date: 10/2/2020 5:01:00 PM
I like the comparison of leaves to gems. Well wishes for a winning spot, Tania.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/2/2020 6:46:00 PM
Thank you Jenna! :)
Date: 10/2/2020 1:50:00 AM
Leaves fall, but they grow again. Enticing poem. ~~
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/2/2020 3:39:00 AM
Thank you Victor! hugs
Date: 10/1/2020 2:57:00 PM
Our trees just starting to change colour, wont be long until they're down. Good luck in the contest. Hope you're well Tania. Tom
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/1/2020 4:01:00 PM
Thank you Tom, we had high winds this week and lost a lot of leaves. I am well and hope you are too!