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puffing on candy cigarette ~ blowing fake rings posted on June 16, 2018

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/16/2018 11:23:00 AM

I loved the taste of those candy cigarettes. MY mom depised them for just the implication of what they represented so I had to sneak around to get them. haha

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/16/2018 1:26:00 PM

She had a good point ! LOL

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 6/16/2018 12:19:00 PM

Lol! ;p

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 6/16/2018 7:13:00 AM

Oh I love it! I remember "smoking" those Popeyes ;) the bubblegum pouch tobacco chewing too! As I try to quit cigarettes, again lol. Sweet haiku Line. xomo

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/16/2018 11:12:00 AM

OMG Maureen, I had never heard of bubblegum pouch tobacco - a dream concept for kids' candy !! LOL

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/15/2018 11:12:00 PM

I certainly had my share. lol Great haiku, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/16/2018 12:01:00 AM

They were good, weren't they! Thanks for joining me in the walk down memory lane, Daniel.