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"What will we do when we run out of time

Knock of death on our door, the final chime"

lines by_ Unseeking Seeker

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I have met death many times in my life so far. Have knocked on the gate of Heaven and been sent back. Not time, I was told. Once, I heard my mother calling me, and I ran searching for her until her voice faded to a faint echo. I think when things like this happen, we are changed in fathomless ways. Life becomes more meaningful, and we seek to make a difference, to be remembered for something. That's how it happened for me, anyways. I have been on a path to find peace and I have. So, if in a moment my last gasp of life was here, I would follow death through the open door to paradise with rapture. I would have no doubt that I had lived well, no anguish for things undone, no regrets and no woes- for I have forgiven myself of all. But, God if not too much to ask. I thought perhaps, maybe I could hear the birds sing just one last time.... tranquility dwells in my heart and my soul faith in God the key ________________________ April 26, 2021 Added after contest finalized- Poetry/Haibun/Faith is the Key Copyright Protected, ID 04-1345-518-26 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Premier contest, Our Last Thoughts sponsor, Unseeking Seeker, Judged 05/01/2021 First Place

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Date: 5/3/2021 8:25:00 AM
A thoughtful write and read...well said. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/3/2021 9:56:00 AM
Jeanne, thank so much for the comment and congrats, love _Constance
Date: 5/2/2021 2:49:00 PM
Excellent work Constance! Congrats on your top placement! Well done.
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Date: 5/3/2021 9:56:00 AM
Mark, thank you for the compliment and congrats, peace _Constance
Date: 5/2/2021 9:14:00 AM
Beautifully done Constance. I think the haibun was a perfect choice for this theme that you expressed with elegance and much grace. Congratulations on your first place win my friend! Sending you blessings and a hug.
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Date: 5/2/2021 2:06:00 PM
Sm, thank you for the compliment and congratulations, I like Haibun also and really should do more of them as they are a good way to express feelings in a beautiful way, love _Constance
Date: 5/2/2021 7:52:00 AM
Excellent piece my dear Constance. May God bless and empower you always. Congratulations on your top win!
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Date: 5/2/2021 2:07:00 PM
Len, thank you for the compliment and congratulations, and the comment, appreciate, peace _Constance
Date: 5/2/2021 1:32:00 AM
Congratulations Constance! How beautiful! May you hear the birds sing for a long, long time dear one, and may your pen continue to bless many with your beautiful words!
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Date: 5/2/2021 2:07:00 PM
BJ, thank you for the congratulations and compliment and the lovely comment, appreciate, love _Constance
Date: 5/1/2021 11:57:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, exposing your faith in the Lord. God bless you.
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Date: 5/2/2021 2:08:00 PM
Beata, thanks for the congrats, compliment and comment, love _Constance
Date: 5/1/2021 1:39:00 PM
Beautiful verse,Constance, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/1/2021 6:10:00 PM
Eve, thank you for the compliment and the congratulations, peace _Constance
Date: 5/1/2021 11:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. An "Amazing" write. I Love It. Have a blessed day writing away....................
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Date: 5/1/2021 6:11:00 PM
Paula, thanks for the congratulations and compliment, peace -Constance
Date: 5/1/2021 8:47:00 AM
Constance, congratulations. Well deserved. I love it.
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Date: 5/1/2021 6:12:00 PM
Marilene, thanks for the congratulations and compliment, peace _Constance
Date: 5/1/2021 7:38:00 AM
Bravo, Constance for a superb poem and well deserved gold medal ~ I'm a huge fan of the haibun style and you certainly did it justice. Awesome ~
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Date: 5/1/2021 6:13:00 PM
Line, thank you for the bravo and compliment, I like Haibun a lot too, peace _Constance
Date: 5/1/2021 7:05:00 AM
This is lovely and brilliant as the sun.. God bless you sweet friend. Congrats on Number One position in the contest. Love, Gina
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Date: 5/1/2021 6:13:00 PM
Gina, thank you so much for the compliment and the congrats, peace _Constance
Date: 5/1/2021 6:41:00 AM
Thank you for taking part in this contest, Constance. Congrats on your win and look forward to your participation in the next contest, ‘EMBRACE & RELEASE’. God bless!
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Date: 5/1/2021 6:56:00 AM
Seeker, thank you for the inspiration and for my awesome placement, I am over the moon happy, and thanks for the congrats, serenity _Constance
Date: 4/26/2021 7:43:00 AM
WoW! BW, You have penned such a well-written piece. You are fortunate to be able to have no regrets in life. Your near-death experience allowed you to be grateful and not to take life for granted. Is this for the contest? If so, it's a good contender-Alexis
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Date: 4/26/2021 2:19:00 PM
Alexis, thanks for the compliment, yes, it is for Unseeking Seekers contest but he does not want contest and sponsor on the poem, hope he likes my poem, love _Constance
Date: 4/25/2021 3:41:00 PM
You've been closer to heaven than I...Lately, I have wondered...but I like your idea of hearing the birds before you leave...Enjoyed it.
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Date: 4/25/2021 6:08:00 PM
Arturo, thank you for the comment, for me it would be the birds singing, for my mom it was to see the sky one last time and I made that happen for her, the next day she was in a comma that she never came out of, love _Constance

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