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Faith, the Hardest Bubble To Burst

Bubbles come in many forms, some make you feel all fuzzy and warm others are like ideas or schemes, most however, are easily torn Burping baby bubbles of gas, bubbles blown that pop in the grass football games, played in a dome, a snow globe made of hand blown glass Faith, as we know is a powerful sphere, it holds us together, in a life full of fear like a friend, you can count on, when times are the worst, as like Christ on the cross, sheds a redeeming tear You can count on your Faith, the Hardest Bubble to Burst, even when the health of your body is cursed with just a moment a day, silent in prayer, believe in your Faith, the unquenchable thirst. Dedicated to my Poet Friend, Carolyn Devonshire, With Love and Faith, God Bless....Taz For Debbie Guzzi's contest

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Date: 9/14/2011 10:22:00 AM
i like how you started w/easiest bubbles and transitioned to hardest. great images and descriptions - wonderful ending :)
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Date: 9/14/2011 10:23:00 AM
congratultions on your HM!
Date: 9/13/2011 6:24:00 PM
CONGRATS TAZ ON YOUR HM IN BUBBLES CONTEST MY FRIEND.. SUPER SPECIAL WRITE.. ENJOY HONOR WITH LUV..
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Date: 9/12/2011 3:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie Guzzi's "Bubbles"contest Taz. Love,Carol
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Date: 9/12/2011 3:34:00 PM
hey Richard congrats on your win..David
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Date: 9/12/2011 3:26:00 PM
Dear Richard, Congratulations on your success in Deb's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/12/2011 2:54:00 PM
Faith is a good topic..Good to know that you know about it and have it..Congrats...Sara
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Date: 9/12/2011 1:06:00 PM
Dear new poet friend Richard..this was a very good write and would have ranked higher except the contest was for Free Verse ;) I appreciated it & your sentiment so must you placed anyway please do try my new contest ...light & love
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Date: 9/10/2011 2:51:00 AM
Dear Richard, I'm sorry I didn't see this sooner. It is absolutely beautiful and I do count on faith to get me through this challenge. You're right, it's the "hardest bubble to burst." Mine remains steadfast and I am very touched by this beautiful poem. Thank you! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/9/2011 4:35:00 PM
How special Carolyn must feel to have this wonderful verse dedicated to her. I agree, she is special and so is the poem!
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Date: 9/7/2011 2:17:00 PM
Can I say Amen to that!! This is really beautiful Taz, hope you don't mind me calling you that.. heartfelt write from a friend to a dear friend.. Enjoyed this tonight..
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Date: 9/7/2011 9:25:00 AM
Awe man, This is great Taz! A winner all the way around and I can't be any happier that you wrote it for whom you wrote it. One awesome lady that is well loved and appreciated . You have done all of us on the soup a service by expressing our sincerest to this wonderful person Thanks buddy. ... Oh yeah ... Your on!
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