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A Lot More Than My Ego Got Bruised

Too high on Rye Make pass at Lass Her date? Six-eight Out weighed (DISmayed!) BRIEF brawl Get mauled... Forsooth! (Loose tooth) Oh my! (Black eye) Behold! (Out cold) ------------ Sunlight Too BRIGHT I ache I quake I heave I grieve Poor me (Agree?)

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/11/2015 11:39:00 PM

awesome to see these again!! Congrats.

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/11/2015 4:45:00 PM

Great footles Tim

Jan Allison

Date: 6/11/2015 3:16:00 PM

Very entertaining string of footles Tim:-) Congratulations:-) Hugs Jan xx

Tim Ryerson
Date: 6/11/2015 3:22:00 PM

Thanks Jan!

Skat A

Date: 6/11/2015 2:58:00 PM

Tim, you are the best at these... :) Congratulations on your FIVE FABULOUS FUNNY FOOTLES. hugs **SKAT**

Paul Callus

Date: 6/10/2015 9:59:00 AM

These are very entertaining, Tim! I love all of them! I do....So, not poor you:) // paul

Monterey Sirak

Date: 6/10/2015 7:06:00 AM

You are so original, creative and down right funny. I never know where your words are going to take me next.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/9/2015 1:01:00 AM

As entertaining as ever : () ) Timothy !!! love your FooTlees : )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/8/2015 10:59:00 PM

Tim, one of THE BEST of the storyteller type footles I have seen in this contest. I would certainly place this one HIGH. And of course, that Honeymoon poem was an oldie but goodie that has garnered me many awards in the past (yet is total fiction. If I found someone that yummy, would I be here all the time. haha)