No More Chances

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I gave him a second chance, a third and fourth chance. He was a smooth talker- a fraud! Prisoner of pretty words, I did not see the truth, oh, I was smitten easy prey for a skilled abuser and yet I miss him still! His words pretty, charming ways, his fierce deep kisses! My chain was sweet lust and desire, it was hard to push him away- it took all my strength. I was smitten an easy prey for an evil man skilled at getting what he wants! _____________________________ September 3, 2016 Poetry/Fibonacci/No More Chances Copyright Protected, ID 16- 825-496-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, Let's Talk About It sponsor, Richard Lamoureaux First Place __________________________________ Submitted to the contest, Second Chances sponsor, Nayda Ivette Negron Second Place

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Andrew Fairchild

Date: 1/2/2019 10:12:00 PM

This type of poem seems so hard to write, but you make it look easy! The shape, the fibonaccci sequence, none of it distracts from, only enhances, the message. ISN'T IT TRUE!!!??? That Evil often wears a friendly face... As a friend of mine used to say, 'Strong Work!'

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/2/2019 2:12:00 PM

I enjoyed seeing your model for us. This kind of scoundrel women often waste their time on. It's so true!! Thanks for this challenge, Constance. Great example for us.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 1/1/2019 11:08:00 PM

This is VERY well-written, Constance. Janice

Jan Allison

Date: 1/1/2019 3:15:00 PM

What a fabulous example, I'll try my best to have a go at this challenging form Constance:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France
Date: 1/1/2019 9:16:00 PM

Jan, thank you for the compliment, I am sure you will write a beauty for me ~

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/1/2019 3:01:00 PM

Dear Heart, this poetry form showcases the beauty of your poem wonderfully. A deep, powerful message delivered with compelling emotional artistry.. 'Prisoner of pretty words' - exquisite imagery.. Love this! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Constance La France
Date: 1/1/2019 9:17:00 PM

Susan, thanks for the the lovely compliment and hoping you will give my contest a try ~

Constance La France

Date: 1/1/2019 2:50:00 PM

Hi Friends, the tricky part of this form is that last 21 syllable line, it cannot roll over to the next line whether you center or not, it must all be on one line. Please give my Fibonacci challenge contest a whirl.