Epitaph

crescent moon on tombstone, ivory dreams rest in eternal darkness. Dated 27th December, 2018 Submitted to the Last Line Poetry Contest Sponsor ' Silent One' Syllable count on poetrysoup - 17

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/11/2019 7:29:00 AM

Creative one. Most epitaphs speak so much about the one in the grave. I like the sentiments penned . Thanks for the visit to my page.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/30/2018 1:20:00 PM

- Congratulations on your win, Dabjani :) - Best wishes for the new year :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/29/2018 9:54:00 AM

Stopping back with congratulations on your top win, Debjani!

Debjani Mitra
Date: 12/29/2018 10:46:00 AM

So nice of you Carolyn.. Enjoy you festive time..

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 12/29/2018 7:48:00 AM

Gorgeous line! Congratulations on your top win Debjani :) xomo

Debjani Mitra
Date: 12/29/2018 8:41:00 AM

Thanks Maureen, the appreciation means a lot of encouragement for me

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/29/2018 7:44:00 AM

Hi Debjani, Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest:-) Alexis

Debjani Mitra
Date: 12/29/2018 8:42:00 AM

Thanks a lot Alexis.. wishing you a happy New year

Silent One

Date: 12/29/2018 6:18:00 AM

Brilliant one liner, great imagery... Have a great start to the new year.. Congratulations on your first place in the one liner contest..

Debjani Mitra
Date: 12/29/2018 8:46:00 AM

I am honored indeed for the big winner recognition of the short line..this was my first attempt to write a monoku. May the new year be a great one

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/26/2018 11:01:00 PM

What a beautiful image you have created, Debjani. I'll look for this one in the winners' round. Best wishes, Carolyn

Debjani Mitra
Date: 12/29/2018 8:47:00 AM

Hi Carolyn, I was elated at your like.. thanks for the wishes, enjoy the year end time welcoming a new one.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/26/2018 9:16:00 PM

A somber tone, beautifully written, Debjani!

Debjani Mitra
Date: 12/29/2018 8:50:00 AM

Oh thanks dear Kim for your praise..I really feel flattered when you compliment..you are yourself so powerful in your words