Entwined

Our destinies have been entwined Two lives running parallel lines 'Cause paths finger out like branches Fate presents crossroads with chances Traveling at different paces With travails of life that face us As our paths crisscross more though time Then tighter and tighter they wind Tarry here and there but stay steady Hearts beating as they make ready At some point becoming entwined Our destinies will join to find Together is where we belong And fate's love will grow to be strong An original poem by the "poemdog" Daniel Turner 14 lines - 8 syllables per

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Kelli White

Date: 2/15/2016 8:39:00 PM

Brilliant Daniel. I love it.

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/15/2016 8:46:00 PM

Thank you, Kelli. I'm just learning how to write sonnets. I was a little late for the Entwined contest so I posted it anyway. I appreciate the flowers:)

Jean Murray

Date: 2/15/2016 11:34:00 AM

Like the film Sliding Doors?? Great images of fated lovers.

Jean Murray
Date: 2/15/2016 11:56:00 AM

Like the film Met Online?? Do you live in Ireland? Are you over eighteen??

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/15/2016 11:40:00 AM

Never seen the movie. However I did get the idea for the opening line from a movie. Paraphrased of course. Thank you for visiting maybe sometime we can have a cup of coffee/tea/beer/ whatever. :) Peace and keep smilin'

Lin Lane

Date: 2/15/2016 11:09:00 AM

I will send your diploma in the mail, Danny. You have travelled down the path of learning and now you travel to the future, creating more beautiful sonnets like this one.

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/15/2016 11:12:00 AM

I had the best teachers on the planet! Thank you for the lovely flowers. You'll always be my Georgia Peach. LOL xoxoxo

Ingrid Showalter Swift

Date: 2/15/2016 8:03:00 AM

Daniel I love it!!!! :)

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/15/2016 8:24:00 AM

Thank you, Ingrid, I appreciate you taking the time to read and i really appreciate the flowers. :) Peace

Winged Warrior

Date: 2/14/2016 10:25:00 PM

Your on it with a sonnet...great verse...good luck man...^WW^

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/14/2016 10:29:00 PM

Thanks brother, I appreciate the pat on the head. Peace my friend.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/14/2016 8:00:00 PM

oh I love that, how roads are already flowing and then they entwine and new life is growing! Love this, Daniel..

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/17/2016 1:44:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. I don't know how I overlooked this reply. I really appreciate you taking the time to read and for your encouraging comments. Peace my dear.:)

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 2/14/2016 6:48:00 PM

Cool.

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/14/2016 7:02:00 PM

Thank you, Jimmy. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. Peace my friend:)

Jeannie Cronin

Date: 2/14/2016 4:51:00 PM

So beautiful, and full of hope! Perfect for Valentines Day! Great write Daniel.

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/14/2016 5:12:00 PM

Thank you, Jeannie. I'm trying to get the hang of this sonnet business. You know I always appreciate a pat on the back. Happy Valentine's Day to you:) Peace